This is heart wrenchingly beautiful:((( you did such an amazing job at portraying the complexities of such relationships through the glass metaphor!!! I specially loved the 2nd last stanza, that seemed to serve as final turning point for the dynamic between the glass girl and the hand holding her together. The simplicity of the poem is definitely it's highlight for me, how it describes the changing dynamics between the two people where the feeling of safety slowly deteriorates. I'm not much of proficient writer myself, maybe that's why but the poem seems quite perfect to me. No lines seem unnecessary. I loved reading this, hope to see more of your work in the future >.<
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