What I love about this is that it gets straight to the heart of everything. There are no answers, only more questions, and even when questions may not seem significant it all ties in together in a big way. I love questions, its the most important part about being a child, so its the most important thing entirely.
This is the kind of prayer that I think should be spoken more. Instead of asking for superficial changing, asking for the strengthening of one's soul.
It was very beautiful.
I loved the style of this very much. It made for an interesting connection of thoughts, I enjoyed the transitions of idea. I'm going to have to try this sometime.
I liked it and I was interested. It reminded me a little of Frankenstein in the sense that the creature's aesthetics are terrifying. I have to admit though I am not quite sure how it ended. My imagination is quite confused where to go from here. =)
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