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I am good at emphasizing good things in addition to at least one suggestion. 2023 Quill Nominee
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I like biographical poems and stories best.
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Horror, Dark because they are scary.
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Review by tracker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello M Jones,

I saw your poem listed in READ A NEWBIE. It was listed on the right panel of your portfolio page. Welcome to WdC which is the way we abbreviate writing.com. I am giving you my thoughts which are solely my opinions which I hope are useful to you.

I was drawn immediately to the sharp picture that was taken my someone skilled in photography. The photo has terrific contrasts with the bright blue sky dotted with puffy clouds. Add in the mountain range then the depth seen from the road and position of the truck or jeep, not sure which.

Your rhyme and rhythm were pleasing when read out loud. The first line hooked me as I already had the photo to work on seeing where you would go with the poem. Very nice job! I did not notice any mechanical issues which is a pleasure. I also noted the genres you chose and each is perfect. Many members look for pieces to read by genre so having them match your piece is the best way to go. Congratulations! Thanks for showing me your writing talent.

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Review of To live in fear  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello jayesandz,

Welcome to WdC. Happy to so many pieces in your portfolio already. This poem "To Live In Fear" appeared on READ A NeWBIE. Here are some thoughts I had which are mine alone. I hope they will be helpful.

My overall impression is the story more than the poem's rhyme or structure. You don't hear as much about situations like your brother's. I am sorry for what he went through but more how you felt and feel now about playing toys while he was suffering.

Getting to the poetry now. The poetic narrative is pleasing when I read it silently. It is even better reading it out loud and giving the voice inflection saying words like "The ugliness was unkind." I put much emphasis on the 'UN" of Unkind!

Thank your for giving us a look at a sensitive life event. Two events, really. You did not rant and rave, or speak with disdain. Instead you chose what a more contemplative adult would say: "How could a father ever hurt his son?" You write extremely well. As time permits, I will read more. Keep on writing.

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Review of Oceans  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Roari,

I found your poem "Oceans" on Read & Review. I liked the measure presented with the way it ebbs and flows with the wise stars keeping watch. The poetic style was pleasing to the ear as I read it out loud. You showed the tale instead of telling it like so many poems do. It is a timeless poem that admonishes us to not lose sight of the critical importance the oceans play to our world. Thanks for sharing your vision of the oceans. I felt like I did when I was standing in water to my waist in the Pacific being rolled and tossed by the undertow, scraping my knees on the glass-like bottom. Great job.

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Review of Dear Self 2024  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Khola Mousethyme,

I found your "Dear Me" entry on a list of other stories, so I stopped to read it. You have such a natural writing style. The things you want to do in 2024 all tie together.

Being in the town where you are most comfortable comes through with the peaceful and encouraging words you are telling yourself. I was nearby when the writing in November was difficult. It sounds like you are moving ahead despite any setbacks. I like the nice even paragraphs. Each expresses an area you will be working on. Your practices and habits with being a witch, a commitment to set a minimum amount daily to be sure there is no procrastinating. Blogging should keep you active in seeing your achievements. Next, you address your health concerns that directly affect having the energy to write your story or book when you don't feel physically well, or an ailment interrupts your sleep cycle. Sleep deprivation can be at the root of many problems.

You will be happy to know your spelling and grammar look flawless. The genre choices you selected fit precisely. Reviewing the nuts and bolts of genres, writing styles, and reading is a great plan to gain or refresh your knowledge which will bring you power and confidence.

I wonder if a mentor would help keep you on track? You may want to ask one of your most trusted friends here if they possibly could fill that role. The purpose is not to badger or harass, but to take a genuine interest in you and your success.

I can't close without commenting on the adorably sweet cover art. The image is so clear and sharp. It was easy to understand the message which is writing, the main focus on WdC. You will do a fine job, Kim, keeping up with those things you wrote to yourself. Keep up the great work!
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Review of In This Place  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello staiNED,

I was visiting the ports of my fellow new 2024 class of yellow cases. I picked "In this Place" at random to review. I was drawn to your poetry which you prefaced so many being dark. I did not hesitate. Your form of poetry is something I have not experienced. In addition, you have so many Awardicons on most of your work that I knew it would be a good read.

You did not disappoint. You opened with a line revealing up front what the poem was going to cover. It hooked me to read further. Phrases like "Anger is my friend" and "Crying in madness traveling to the painful places" brought my emotions to the surface.

One correction you can make is the word traveling is misspelled as it has one l not two. For a rating, I do not one minor thing like that bring down from the deserved five stars for your poem.

You have a lot of work here in your portfolio. As I mentioned, most have recognition which is telling about your expertise and great poetry writing skills. Thank you for sharing your raw feelings of the most horrible thing I could think of. "I am glad I read your Bio and see you are not a male Ned but a stained female. Keep up the wonderful work. It was a privilege to read.

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Review of Out the Window  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jacky,

Nice to meet you. Your flash fiction story "Out the Window" showed up in the Read & Review section. I will give you my thoughts after reading it. These are my personal opinions that I hope will be useful.

Overall impression: A story that has a cool twist at the end. Your build up to the twist was done very well. I was anxious to find out what was outside the window.

I liked your dialogue the best of all. It was just so realistic, like a couple would talk casually without all the big adjectives. It was so normal. I did not believe anything was sinister out there, that it could be some kind of bird or a harmless animal.

A couple of things to bring to your attention. There is one little correction I believe in the line: “Outside... right out window, maybe in the tree?” I think you meant to say right outside. Secondly, I wanted to suggest that the genres that you assigned "Fiction, Contest Entry, Other" Could be adjusted to have more readers. Once a contest is over, it is a good idea to come back and assign another genre. The genres could be science fiction, thriller/suspense, and mystery.

Great writing, Jacky. I was engaged in the story right away. It takes a special skill to successfully write a story in such a brief timeframe. I will get back this way to read another. You left me wanting more which is a major goal of an author.

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Review by tracker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi *Heartb* Carly,

I found your poem Searching for Peace in Read and Review. It was written almost ten years ago. I am so glad it came up for me to review.

Overall impression: This is an excellent poem that meets the criteria for the Honor Our Veterans group contest. You may have another poem like it in you to possibly create and submit there sometime. I had a brief relationship with a man who enlisted in the Air Force during the Vietnam War. I know how concerned I was waiting for word he was well. It is harder on the family and friends than the military person.

Your rhymes and rhythm are right on. The words flowed and moved flawlessly from one thought to the next. One thing you may look at doing is to break the lines up into quatrains. I think the lines would have a greater impact.

I read that you wrote not to be afraid of your Moderator status. I had to smile because I have found every Moderator easy to talk to and to review their work. Thanks for writing this thoughtful poem. It did remind me of days gone by, but applies just as actively today.

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Review by tracker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi David,
It is me again. Your poem appeared in the review a newbie section. I was drawn to your description. It is different than the other piece I reviewed.

Your poem started with the anticipation and loving of a little one. No matter how hard you try to protect them, sometimes there is another plan for them. If they have an affliction causing them to be just a shell, or pass from this earth both are sad. Nothing you have done has caused what happened. It reminds all of us of the fragility of life. I liked the rhyme. The only thing to make it better for me would be to put it in quatrains to get the full beauty of the thoughts grouped together.

I am glad I was able to come back so soon and read more of your work. You write extremely well. Keep up the great work!

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Review of Revenge Chapter 1  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello David.

I found your story on Read & Review. I am pleased to review Revenge-Chapter 1. I see it is the first chapter of a book. I liked the storyline. Your character Dar'mont is a strong player with a soft heart for his love. You can feel his rage. I was engaged as he told the story of the attack. I liked the way you phrased things like "Aches and pains...rippled through his body,foul beasts, and fueling his drive is pure hatred. These are memorable images you showed us which helped feeling like part of the action.

A couple of things you may want to look at. Near the beginning, you talked about tracking them for 3 months. You want to spell it out as three. "The guard paid more mind to the wedding than their duties," would sound better as the guardsmen. Describing his love's hair "braided back with the back coming down straight" used the word back twice in one sentence. It was confusing. Braids do traditionally hang down the back or if it was a partial braid the rest would be straight. It may be clearer to say "Her beautiful braided hair."

Thanks for writing Chapter 1. The plot is sound. His hatred contributes to the friction you need between him and the marauders. Congratulations on the story and I will watch for more writing from you. You write and I will be reading!

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Review of " THE GLORY "  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Netty,
Your poem came to my attention at the Read & Review area. It is a wonderful testament to your beliefs. The free verse was a good choice to make the statements you made. I am not sure doing an entry in all Capital letters was what I would do. As you know on the computer capital letters are like shouting. I can see what you had to shout about however so we just put it under poetic license. Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem. Keep writing.
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Review by tracker
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Loyd,

I found your story, “Invisible Threads-Chapter 3” in the Read & Review section. You instructed me to read the prologue, chapters one and two which I have now read. Here are a few opinions that are solely my own. I hope they will be useful to you.

Overall impression: I immediately thought of the prominent show, “America’s Got Talent” when I read about the talent search. That show has revealed behind-the-scenes footage of contestants but not their handlers. Having some knowledge about it helped me appreciate the form and characters. (I auditioned and appeared on “The Newlywed Game” years ago). I liked the characters' names. Too often there are odd names that are not commonly used which I think makes a story less believable. The main strength of the story is the dialogue which came through as natural. I could picture myself in the conversations and part of the action, as people ran, not walked, in their pressure cooker jobs.

A couple of sentences need attention. The sentence “The judges comments were positive albeit redundant and clich. Judges needs an apostrophe at the end and I think you meant cliche not clich. The other is, “His success will be one hell of a resum/FONT> builder for” where the resum/FONT> should be removed.

Thanks for the nice large font and line spacing. It made for easy reading. I will come back to read each Chapter to find out if Gary is the overall winner. Again, welcome to our community. You are a gifted writer and a newly acquired terrific asset to WDC.

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Review by tracker
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Hope,

Your story appeared in the Noticing Newbies review request forum. I enjoyed reading it and had a few observations I hope will be useful for you.

I liked the premise of the story. I did not know what would happen to Finch, but it was indeed cruel what the other boys did to him. It was neat the way you had Finch mess with the teacher by cutting his debate short. I guess it does not matter what they were debating about, Finch was the best.

I found but one missing quotation mark after "A bandwagon fallacy." The grammar and spelling look fine.

Thanks for this creative story. In short order your characters were developed. I think I remember a few classmates who were as clever as Finch. Keep the stories coming!

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Review of Dance, Dance  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Sonali,

Your poem "Dance, Dance" appeared on Read & Review. I have a few thoughts to share with you which I hope will be useful to you.

I felt like I was dancing as I read the words. There are so many active movements in it. The repeating of the words "They danced" added to the rhythm of the poem. I felt the freedom to dance!

The only two lines that interrupted my rhythm were "They danced the folk dance and the classic/They danced through the thin and the thick." The rhyming words classic and thick did not match the previous and next lines with the rhyming words each just one syllable.

I liked swaying to the music that your words sang. Nice job!

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Review of Dear Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello elephantsealer,

I saw your name in our newsfeed and it got my attention. Bravo for writing this "Dear Me" entry. I agree with what you have expressed as the big void in the publishing world. I have read a few books published by writers here on WdC. Stories from most of the other writers are just as good. Nice character development with believable plots. The sentence structure have the periods and commas in their correct places; good flawless pieces. I see you have received a number of review and would say they were complimentary. Continue with your 2024 plan, it is a good one.

I don't aspire to be published. I like the one-on-one contacts I have nurtured here. I am the one who roots for the underdog, cheering the protagonist of the sub-plot, but most of all communicating with the author if I am happy with what was written. An author needs to know when they are appreciated and not by the bottom line sales. I will come back to see how your year is progressing.

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Review by tracker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Theactual Treasure,

I found your poem on the left sidebar under Read & Review. I enjoyed reading "Midnight Seduction" out loud several times. There was such a wonderful melodious sound and pleasing pace. The rhyme was excellent. Your words were carefully selected to relate exactly what you wanted to say. Thank you for this poem that did leave me wanting more.

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Review of Let's Go.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sue,

As promised, I selected one of your stories to review. I chose “Let’s Go.” It was an item that was highlighted. I have some thoughts to share, that are solely mine, that I hope you will find useful.

Overall impression: I immediately appreciated the piece with the large font and double spacing between paragraphs. Opening the story with a question is a great technique to get the reader’s attention. I like stories about children going on an adventure.

What I liked: I liked that all we knew about May’s physical appearance was that she had freckles and at the end that she had red hair. Besides having a puffed jacket, we only know Mickey is a gentleman as he takes her hand to guide her through the ins and outs of the journey. He is her protector. I liked the way you worked their ages into the narrative. I was thrilled to see them escape their less-than-desirable little lives for a few hours. You have a terrific balance of narrative and dialogue! Great job!

A couple of things to bring to your attention. In the sentence "Where are we going,Mickey? We need to put a quotation mark after the question mark. The last sentence starting “He gave her a shy kiss” needs to be started after a double space. Finally, your embedded YouTube code does take you to the YouTube piece. https://youtube in the URL shows https://youtu.be has an errant period in it.

What a wonderfully sweet story of the glorious time before the teenage years set in. The build-up getting to the car has nice action, as they run, which is where I started to read faster to find out where Mickey was taking her. One last aspect I point out is the genre “other” is not specific. I recommend you use the opportunity to select a third genre. Members look at genres they are interested in so a third one will increase the chance you will have maximum
exposure.

Your writing style flows so well, it is a joy to read. It is complete with all the story elements that make up a great story. I look forward to reading other stories you have written. You definitely have a writing gift.

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Review by tracker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Gervic,

I went to the Please Review page and look what I found. I settled in for a good read of your story "Dawn After The Storm-A Tale of Redemption" which did not disappoint.

Your main character Demus, aka Raven, is memorable. I picture him as a gruff-looking individual whose past is described enough to know he made some poor choices. He has been working to redeem himself. The moral is even someone who has had a dark past can make up for it with good deeds. You illustrated it likening his awakening to a light that flickered then became “a flame, a burning desire to break free from the chains of his past.” What a fabulous metaphor.

One little correction is in the first paragraph “sat hunched over a untouched mug" where the “a” should be “an” because the word after it starts with a vowel.

I liked the character of the barkeep who was cynical. It made for the tension you need in a good story. The scene in the bar was a great place for Demus to admit his change of heart. There are a number of lines that move an average story to an excellent one. Congratulations on a great piece. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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Review of Believe Me  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Princess Thai,

Welcome! I found your writing at the read & review area. I am pleased to give you this review of "Believe Me". These are my opinions only and hopefully, they will be useful to you.

What I liked: I like that you wrote this in free verse. It has such depth. When you can't stop your mind from thinking it disturbs everything around you. The simile that it is like a wheel is true. It reminds me of hamsters who run endlessly on their wheels and get nowhere. There is hope at the end with determination that things will get better.

There is one word correction. Collogues I think you meant colleagues.

Congratulations on your first entry. I hope you will write often "to pass the time."

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Review of The Curse Unravel  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi GERVIC,

I saw your story The Curse Unravel in the newsfeed. Your description caught my attention. I am writing this review with observations which are solely my own. I hope they are useful for you.

The story of Dylan and Yvonne was an outstanding albeit short love story. I had to dig into my imagination because you did not tell me much about how they appeared as you showed me, and did not tell me. That's excellent because that was the point of writing the story in that manner. I remember only that she was “beautiful,” and he had a “husky” voice and wore cologne. Your words are clear and concise with very one of them important to keep me engaged and the story moving forward. By the end, I was cheering for them to succeed in their future resolve to face the curse together. The extra storyline, about how she reacted when she touched his hand, opened a new line of thinking she somehow had a greater connection to him and his curse than either of them knew.

The best line is “You were the one, the sun in my sky, the anchor in my storm.” I have not read more beautiful metaphors in a very long time. Thank you for those words. I even learned a new word: prescient.

Congratulations on this story placing first in the Tales Shown, Not Told contest. It was an excellent, well thought out, and impeccably constructed winning entry with no mechanical flaws. I enjoyed your writing style and plan to come back and read more of your work. Way to go!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello EvilEgg,

I was given your SteamPunk: A List of Themes by Beck Firing back up! today. It was in reply to my inquiry what is Steampunk? Your comprehensive list is awesome. It completely covers the numerous aspects of the genre. The way you listed them with the item in bold made it easy to read. It is a type of science fiction only going back in time with specific cues for a past era specifically with steam or watch. I now know what it is!

The list of website references is over the top great in that it must have taken a long time to assemble them. The research that went into preparing these possible themes is awe-inspiring.

Great work and a dream for a writer like me who has neither read nor written in the steampunk genre. I have everything I need right here in one place! I just may write and submit a piece of steampunk in Beck's contest. Thank you for this page. A copy is in my reference file.

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Review of MUSIC AND ME  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Naomi,
I just read and want to review your personal story Music and Me. These are some thoughts I had which I hope you will find useful.

You wrote your story beautifully. It was in order as things happened with your singing. Having parents who sang was a blessing. I think music is a gift. Your whole family spending time together to sing and read poetry had to be the fondest memory for you.

The words you used to describe things like Mama "Swaying her body, singing and smiling." I can imagine in my mind how that looked and sounded. They were precious years and isn't it wonderful to have those great memories to look back upon?

As English is your second language, congratulations on having only a few suggestions. One is "Sometimes I alternate" where the past tense alternated would be used. I am rating this work five stars because it is such a great piece of writing.

I loved reading your story. It is well-written and a joy to see how things happened during your youth. Also, there is nothing as grand as being a grandmother. I have eleven grandchildren whom I adore. Keep up the great work!

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Review of Safety Concerns  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Amethyst,

I am writing this review of "Safety Concerns" in response to your request for feedback on your steampunk story.

Overall impression: I really enjoyed reading the story. I particularly liked the dialogue which was clear and concise. Every exchange contributed to moving the story along while introducing your characters and what their purpose was.

The steampunk genre is new to me. Your story fits the genre perfectly well. The last line left the reader to imagine what would happen the next time. That is not used as often as it should; a cliff hanger of sorts.

You have a wonderful knack for dialogue. Your story is so well constructed where you show us, not tell us. You have no mechanical errors in your exactly 1000 word story. How did you get it to come to exactly that number of words?

Keep writing great stories. You are talented and deserve to receive continued praise from future reviewers.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Lou-By His Grace,

Your lyrics came up on Read & Review. Here are a few thoughts that are my opinion alone. I hope they are useful to you.

You set the frame and situation straight up in the first sentence. I took the hook and read on to find out who she was and why she was missed. Your chorus was especially poignant as I hate to see anyone cry, much less drown in their tears. I used my imagination to fill in who she was. The dramatic depth of despair narrows down to the line "The pain in my heart makes for good rhyme".

I would like to see one more quatrain to give a symbol of hope rising out of the troubling thought of missing her. You "decided to write more." Perhaps a memorable metaphor to tie up the storyline.

I don't see many works of lyrics. I enjoyed reading yours. Good job!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello dragonwoman,

I found your story Defective Merchandise as an editor's pick in the current edition of the Fantasy Newsletter. I am happy I did because it gave me a wonderful break in a fairly intense day. Your two characters were developed exclusively through their dialogue. The young whippersnapper, who declared the wand defective, when, in fact, he did not know how to use its magical power, was stereotypical with a twist at the end. He covered his basis by getting the wands to both learn the basics and jump to the best of wands to prove his prowess. The twist at the end was a pleasant surprise. Nothing like a wise wizard to have the last say! You write natural conversations which are clear and concise. It made it easy to picture the interaction by your showing it, not telling it. That is a "knack" writers to set their work apart from the rest.

For an easier reading experience, I would recommended double spacing.

Great story idea and less often seen story entirely of dialogue. I like it a lot. Keep up the excellent writing. It just takes one story like this to be a fan!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear You, PureSciFi,

My interest was piqued when I clicked on your Dear Me entry at the Hub. Yay! A legible, larger font sized and styled contest entry. These things alone hooked me into reading your story. I loved the way you transitioned from one point to the next effortlessly. Each urged me to read and enjoy each step. It felt like stream of consciousness yet constructed in a way to make a case for your style of writing. The commitments to your writing this year are robust. It was helpful to mention the activities you took part in here at WdC. The same many of us have followed in various orders. I found the format pleasing because it can be much expedient yet boring to write a list. You filled in the reasoning behind each plan. All made for a satisfying read with a clear beginning, middle, and end. Good luck accomplishing some great output in 2024!

There is one issue to take a look at. In the ninth paragraph there is a gap between the words "because" and "anything" that is easy to correct.

Thank you for deciding to participate in writing your Dear Me entry. The best part of reviewing is discovering another expert author whose work enriches your WdC experience. Congratulations on your Dear Me story. In a few words, it is fabulous!

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