Great story. You pulled me right into it and kept me there! I love the way you write your descriptive paragraphs - "The sun had hidden it’s face as if ashamed to look upon the goings on below." "The marketplace was a chaotic scene, rainbowed by gaudily-colored canopies overhanging sellers’ booths and glittered by cheap jewelry hung from hawkers’ stalls like common tinsel." Beautiful!
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