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Rated: E | (3.0)
Heartfelt. Seems like you were hurt pretty bad.
Technically a few pointers -
1) You gave me [] girlfriend and I thank you - [a]
2) Because I'm still way [to] high on loving you - [too]

Also, adding a few punctuations will help picture the emotions better.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Heartfelt. Seems like you were hurt pretty bad.
Technically a few pointer -
1) You gave me [] girlfriend and I thank you - [a]
2) Because I'm still way [to] high on loving you - [too]
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