I read your story. It was a good story. The characters were chosen correctly in the storyline.
The storyline was simple but could have been modified to make it more interesting. There was no much role for Aden's friends.
Still Reading your story made me happy.
Keep writing…. Best of luck…
Really it is true that one of the toughest time in life is when we don't know where we are and we are lost..
and it is our Lord who leads us in this situation
I totally agree with your writing.
This is your second work which i am reading. You write very nice.
I liked your story. All the characters were chosen correctly.
The storyline was interesting.
You portrayed the whole story very beautifully with nice setting of time frame.
Reading it satisfied me for my thirst of nice writings.
Keep writing such inspiring stories…. Best of luck…
It was a well written drama. Your writing compelled me to finish it one go. The characters were chosen correctly.
The storyline was straight with unnecessary twists. Not a single scene seemed useless.
Reading it made me happy.
Keep writing…. Best of luck…
Nice horror story...
It was a very well written story. Your writing compelled me to finish it one go.
The storyline was simple & straight. Not a single word seemed useless.
Style of narration was very good. The way you narrated feelings of the person is excellent.
Reading it made me satisfied for my hunger of well written nice stories.
Keep writing…. Best of luck…
The plot of the story was very interesting and the characters were properly chosen.
The whole story was nicely written, full of emotions, simple & so easily heart-touching.
Reading it made me happy.
Keep writing such nice stories….
First of all many many thanks to you for writing this essay.
Information about right and wrong usage of adverbs and verbs is very useful and surely will prove of great help to persons like me.
Keep on writing such informative essays...
Thanx again...
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