The story line is interesting. How did the people float on the water for days with no food or water? I take it the people were in purgatory then the boats showed up? The one canoe went to hell while the rest of them found Heaven. It could use another round of editing making for a smooth read. Examples, The opening sentence threw me, why would the boats be there. You could use more descriptive details about the island; what did they live off of, were there wild animals, what kind of tress were on the island. Suddenly the tide rushed in. Tides roll in was there a storm that made it rough? An Ark is a ship not a boat or canoe. It's a good story now, with more work and dedication it can be a great story. Don't feel bad my intentions aren't to hinder you but help you. I get bad reviews on youwriteon; however, I keep trying. You could take these six hundred words and make a complete book just with it. I wish you good luck. Keep writing this story proves you have talent
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