\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/venomouscandy
Review Requests: OFF
18 Public Reviews Given
18 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Worthwhile  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
nice poem

idea is very good feel nostalgic


and when i read these words

While looking back try to smile
Wasn't it all worthwhile
Wasn't it all worthwhile

i also smile and think about my past same feelings come to mind
as i remember my past i also try to smile

keep on writing
2
2
Review of The King's Sons  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
theme of this poem is good and new
but

i think if you write this poem in prose
it will be more effective and power full
be cause its still look like story more then poem
3
3
Review of The Key  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow
what a poem. oh its beautiful
i cant explain it in word
there is every element in it to grab the reader till end
when i start reading this poem i wonder what kind of keys and then i though ofcourse treasure keys
so i go further and when master give key to man
i thought now man will be richest because he got big treasure

but i was wrong
this was not the treasure of this world
the treasure was surely very great
an i feel bad to not think so deeply

its really a great job
4
4
Review of My Mind's Recess  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
what a poem

i have no word but i am trying

i think its about me
or every one in this world
no??

best part of the poem is

Deep within the recess of my mind
Dwell the recollections of times gone by
At some I laugh, at others I cry
Deep within the recess of my mind
5
5
Review of Whim of Wind  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
nice poem
6
6
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
nice survey but i wanna know what you do after knowing me
if you reply i will be satisfy

i dont think that any one can know other
7
7
Review of Sad Goodbye  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
sad good bye

i read it and just feel that you express my own feelings
poem descend deep in my heart with full of emotions
8
8
Review of Noticing Newbies  Open in new Window.
Review by Venomous Candy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
hello

i m Venomous Candy live in Pakistan
i write much in my native language Urdu but one day an idea struck in
and i wrote "What you do"

of course i like it but need opinion of others
be cause human being can learn more by criticisem of others

good wishes for all new writers
8 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/venomouscandy