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8 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Detailed and in depth with a good mix of constructive criticism and positive feedback. I follow a template to ensure all reviews include first thoughts, positives, things to work on, and final thoughts-- this means you are promised the fulfillment of those criteria.
I'm good at...
Technical issues, as well as general feedback on a piece from a readers perspective.
Favorite Genres
Horror and fantasy, as well as creative non fiction, but will read anything
Least Favorite Genres
Conedy
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, essays
Least Favorite Item Types
Nothing
I will not review...
Nothing is out of bounds for me.
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Review by Vittoria Russo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very interesting read, it follows like a poetic fever dream. Confusing in a good way, you find yourself wondering what exactly is happening. There's a whirlwind of characters, and the narration is very poignant and descriptive. It's a touch hard to read, as the vocabulary is not for the average reader, and like I said, it's almost prose like in it's descriptors and language, but occasionally is just a touch verbose. I loved reading it, and I feel like the scenes are in the perfect place, but some of the dialogue is truly mystifying in what the characters mean. Perhaps edit it to be more simple in the dialogue, as the nuanced reader will have no trouble, but the uninitiated will have a VERY hard time reading this. All around very interesting though, and very pretty in the way it's written. I feel almost like I'm reading Shakespeares midsummer dream,but like Shakespeare it takes quite a bit of brain power to read, though I think it's worthwhile nonetheless. great job!! Very beautiful in the way it's written.
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Review by Vittoria Russo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)

*Star*First Thoughts: Very interesting poem, with lots of rhythm to it.
*StarB*Positives: I like the above stated rhythm, and the poem has a great flow!
*StarB*To be Worked On: The subject matter gets a little lost by the last line, and I'm not sure the last line fits very well with the rest of your poem. Perhaps consider breaking it up into two parts!
*Star*Final Thoughts: Very well done, just needs a lil tweaking!
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Review by Vittoria Russo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)

*Star*First Thoughts: Its comedic, fun, and easy to read!
*StarB*Positives: See the above, plus, I love the formatting, its very well done.
*StarB*To be Worked On: Perhaps try to use more descriptive imagery?
*Star*Final Thoughts: Good poem!
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