If that's how you feel toward him, I envy him. That is such a sweet piece, so I'll sa this again, I wish I was the one you are talking about. Anyway, I love the rhyming scheme and how you have provoked my thoughts and feelings with your words. It has given me a clear image of your perspective. Keep it up, I love your work
A very catchy topic with an amazing description; I love it. The story is flowing nicely and I hope you are planning on writing longer stories so that your readers will enjoy being immersed deep in your imaginative thinking. I will personally love to hear more from you, keep it up.
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