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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was a very good story, i must say. i loved the discription and the feeling in your words. as for spelling and grammer, i wouldn't be one to ask about that, but i thought it was wonderful regardless. the only thing that i wish to critique you on is when Samantha and the other three were lot in the storm..... it would be good to tell how your character was feeling just then....write on! ~WakingShadow
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