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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
Review by watchung123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
That was a very interesting story. I urge you to write more of it. There were characters in it(Samantha) but you never really learned of other character's names and personality. You could describe things more although I love the sixth paragraph and how you used all those terrific vocabulary words. You seem to have a big imagination and I encourage you to use it. If one of your stories seems kind of stupid and dumb and you're wondering why you ever wrote it in the first place, don't destroy it. Keep writing, no matter how terrible. This story has a lot of potential but you could do with some dialogue, description, and maybe add some more personality to the characters. Other than that, keep up the great work
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Review by watchung123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like this poem. it reminds me a tad of myself. I like to do this too. I just sit with a notepad and a pen and jot down a bunch of random thoughts and put them in the form of a poem. Yours is just catchy and has a good rhythm. Your vocabulary is decent too, although you could improve it a little. There's always room for improvement. So keep up the good work. I like your poem and I hope you right more(even if they are a little random and weird).
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