I have never really liked a story in the first person. When I seen it was I almost stopped reading. I did continued and was glad I did. And in the end I seen why it was in the first person. The images Blompkin wrote were lasting. I loved the blood streak on the wall as he slid down. Although I've never played a video game like that I still loved the story.
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