I loved this, I found not many faults and it almost made me cry. It's simple but sweet in so many ways, that concept of love or friendship through life and death. It makes you feel clean and refreshed after reading it. I don't think I can see much that has to be improved to tell you the truth, I like the overall flow when I read it even though I do love lots of words in one work to convey deep meaning. I hope you will continue with your works, I did enjoy this one a lot!
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