mama umbridge's (whowantspunch) Reviews

I really love the wording in this and the ending made me tear up a bit because it was so sweet :') I love going to my grandma's house because she's always making something delicious and I know what you mean about how the house has a certain smell. I'm lucky enough to still have my grandma and her home-baked goods. You make me cherish this fact more than I ever have.

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#3821993

Review of Treachery (2nd Place)

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Now that was a twist that I didn't expect. Bravo :)

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#3817536

Review of Selfless Bastard

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I understand what you mean. It seems like just yesterday that I was a little kid and now....I'll be 18 in 10 months. Time really does fly. And it sucks. Great job.

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#3635108

Review of Stranger at the Diner

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I loved this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Write some more!

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#3631675

Review of Over the Edge

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

awesome story. good job!

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#3608294

Review of Blue M&M

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

that was awesome

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#3604065

Review of The Long Journey

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Loved the wording and the twist. Haha!

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#3603993

Review of A Ghost Story

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was awesome. It made a chill go down my spine. Keep writing Kerry!

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#3600084

Review of Fire in Podunk

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Fantastic job. I feel so bad for Lucy and for Michael because now he has to live with the guilt that it was his fault that Lucy died. I can find nothing wrong with your story and I think you'd make a successful writer. Write on!

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#3600046

Review of The Crime

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Aww. That was sad. But way to go Alli!

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#3596256

Review of Prisoner

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Loved your story. It was really cool. Write on! :)

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#3593515

Review of Bound By Love

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Love it!

Great job!

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#3592223

Review of Nine

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I kind of liked the poem. I don't know anything about baseball and I don't really like rhyming. Other than that, thought you did a very good job with the poem.

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#3588239

Review of My Angel

Review by mama umbridge

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I thought this was very well written. The author of this poem did a very good job. I only have one question about line 4 stanza 1. Is that word supposed to be grovel? If it is that would make a lot more sense.