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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This story seems to be good so far. There are only 2 major issues that I can see from what I've read (free member just so you know). First is the there seems to be a lot of dead ends, but thats only natural. The second is that the fetishes included are much to specific. Maybe some more general ones like making everyone anthro or futanari.
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Review of Anime Hentai  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So far this story looks good. The only real issue I can see is that there are far too many dead ends. While It'd be too tedious for me to check every option, due to being a free member, here are some sugestions for the naruto path. There needs to be a futa option for gender and an idea for the second choice in ch7:something different, would be kurama being in heat. That's all i can think of so far.
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