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for entry "Supplication" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I dramatically like this piece written in a spiritual manner.
It gives or conveys the message in clearness and
simplicity.

The words are easy to follow. No typos
seen and the thought is well-expressed.

Write on,
Earl Pablo
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Review of My Heart Belongs  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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 My Heart Belongs  (E)
Life brings different types of love.
#1517805 by audra_branson


Thank you for posting an entry @ "Echoes of The Heart Poetry Contest" 

Congratulations for winning Third Place.

I love reading this piece. The poetic pattern used is interesting.
The message flows consistently throughout.
I see no conflicting words and typos.

The message comes in a subtle way.
My favorite is the last verse where one accounts for his life and
rest in paradise.

Write on!
Earl

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Review of Love's Sunset  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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 Love's Sunset  (E)
With autumn came our love's sunset-2nd place in Echoes of the Heart Poetry Contest
#1604448 by Koyel~writing again


Thank you for posting an entry @ "Echoes of The Heart Poetry Contest" 

Congratulations for winning Second Place.
This Triquint poem is fun and wonderful.
I love the overall thought it conveys.
I see no problem with the rhyming and syllabication schemes.
All went out good.

Here's my favorite part:


Yonder stands the bench where we first met,
Warm kisses made our lips wet.
With autumn's onset,
Love's sunset.
Lie.

See you again next round.

Write on!
Earl

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Review of My life in you  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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 My life in you  (13+)
I've found my faith.
#1628644 by saintgoody


Thank you for posting an entry @ "Echoes of The Heart Poetry Contest" 

Congratulations for winning first place.

What makes this poem unique is that the
thoughts are well-organized
and the words are written in a way that
everyone could easily comprehend.

This part here catches my attention most:

I won’t be afraid.
Even if,
the world forsake me,
Imprisons me,
with pain and misery.

I enjoy reading this piece.

Write on!
Earl

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Review of Wasting Away  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi kristilove,

I could relate very well to this piece.
It has clear thoughts of fragile, sadness
and pain.

The rhyming is impressive.
The words slip to my tongue
smoothly.

No typos spotted. You have
a great pick at your title.

Stanza three is my favorite
of all.

Write on!
Earl
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Review of Teke  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Enga,

I always appreciate tribute poems
to love ones.

The thoughts are expressed
in simplicity and vividness.

There's no dangling words found
and the flow is good.

The last two lines seem like a couplet
and it has a wonderful thought.

I have no corrections or suggestions
to make.

Write on!
Earl
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Review of A Lullaby  
Rated: E | (3.5)
My name is Wilson Jebb and am giving you a review.

Thoughts & Impressions

I appreciate the message of this piece. It's
clear and easy to follow.

Notes
Choosing the past tense of this poem is
better than the present. You may use the
past form.

1. I lay in my bed, my eyes did close
*** I lay on
*** eyes are

2. I lay, listening to the thunder claps.

This catches my attention

Those soothing sounds engulf my ear.
The storm rages on but I have no fear.

Remarks

I have a wonderful reading.

Peace-
Wison Jebb

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Review of Tenacity  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My name is Wilson Jebb and am giving you a review.

Thoughts & Impressions
This is a very short piece expressing thoughts about life.
You have done a splendid in conveying the message.

Notes
I have no suggestions for you. All is great.

This catches my attention
The title and image are wonderful.

Remarks
This piece makes me appreciate a writer's
craft in giving tribute to life.

Peace-
Wison Jebb
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Review of Tenacity  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My name is Wilson Jebb and am giving you a review.

Thoughts & Impressions
This is a very short piece expressing thoughts about life.
You have done a splendid in conveying the message.

Notes
I have suggestions for you. All is great.

This catches my attention
The title and image are wonderful.

Remarks
This piece makes me appreciate a writer's
craft in giving tribute to life.

Peace-
Wison Jebb
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