I can feel the emotion in this poem, very strong. What some people do not understand is that when you write from the heart you are sharing a part of yourself. Exposing yourself even, if I may. And when you know you have reached your audience is when they can feel what is expressed in the particular piece, and I did feel that here. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Very cute story! I like the twist at the end, I love it when you are not expecting it- hense the twist. Great plot, very well laid out characters. There were a few misspellings, very slight, but I think you write beautifuly. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it!
Short but sweet. Very nice, I liked the way the words, just letters typed on the screen, can have a presence all their own. Almost as a whisper this poem is very well put. Thanks for sharing!
I found this story to be a little slow going at first but soon the words written painted a wonderfully colorful picture of not only the characters but also the backdrop and many surroundings they were placed in. I love the way you portray the many characters and emotions experienced within the story. I had a great time reading this piece. I must admit I do not usually enjoy sci-fi geners but this was a refreshing experience. Thank you so much for deciding to share your work with us all.
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Very cute story! I like the twist at the end, I love it when you are not expecting it- hense the twist. Great plot, very well laid out characters. There were a few misspellings, very slight, but I think you write beautifuly. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it!