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Review of House of Bone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written, I enjoyed this piece, regardless of its sad content.
Thank you for sharing.

Keep writing!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is VERY well written!
Keep adding pieces like this one to your portfolio, and you'll go far!

Write on!

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Review of Release  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I know nothing of writing poetry, but your sings to me.
Very intense and well written in my opinion.

Write On!
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Review of Discovery  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is beautifully written. The tension and outpouring of feelings are so true to life.

Wonderful work.
Keep Writing!

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Review of The Final Sip  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written!
I especially like your first line - On the edge of the world, looking down.

Be well and Keep Writing!
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Review of we were fools  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Amen! Well said.

Keep writing!
Be well,
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Review of Life's Lessons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well Said!
Keep writing!

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Review of Sonnet 30  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written.
What more can I say...

Thank you for sharing.

Be well,

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Review of From Me to You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I had to read this over a few times, as I enjoyed how smoothly it was written. I admire how you managed to say so much in so few words.

Keep Writing!

Be Well,

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Review of Witness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing such an important topic, written in such an eloquent manner.

Great work!
Keep writing!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love how you took an everyday scene in your yard and not only saw the beauty in it all, but managed to put it into words beautifully, nice work!

I have a couple of questions though - in the following -

Morning dew upon the gate,
dust is early, dawn is late. (did you mean 'dusk' ?)

Behind us are (are)? long gone and past,
and once again it's spring at last.

Keep Writing!

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Review of Destiny Decided  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very interesting read!

I like your style of writing.

I hope you don't mind my pointing out a couple of things?
In this sentence -
They didn’t fight for anything that their enemies possessed or did they believe that they would ever win this war. (Perhaps it would read more smoothly if you used nor instead of or as in - 'possessed; nor did they') Just a thought.

In the following sentence - did you mean 'intentions'?
Try as they might no human could hide from the rage of those whose intensions was to murder them.

No matter how many sunsets I see there will never two that are exactly alike. (missing 'be'-will never be two)?

Other times there won’t be a single cloud in site and only a pale blue sky and a bright and beautiful (did you mean 'sight' ?)

These mountain protect us form the demons that live on the outside. ('mountain_s' ?)

Okay, I'll quit nitpicking now.
Keep writing!

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Review of Lost In Thought  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Isn't daydreaming a wonderful thing, ones mind opens to a myriad of ideas, which you have artfully put into the right words, in the right places to shape this work.

Beautifully written.


Be well,


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Review by WordSpinner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written!

I especially liked this line -
Heavy boxes - filled with the words of others - crashed to the ground.

Good luck filling your portfolio with many more like this. *Smile*

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Review of Golden  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This made me feel good, as a read. I only wish it were longer...if it were, I would have read every word. Nicely written. Sad, but an understanding shared by many, though perhaps not with as much grace as you told it. Was this a passing shared by someone you know? If not, you have a wonderful imagination.
Be well,

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Beautifully written. I just entered a peice the other day about the loss of my husband, "My Irishman" They are heartrending to write but there is a degree of cleansing in getting it out, isn't there?
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