It was very good, I could visualize the characters clearly and the local speech and phrases added context. I'd rework the dialogue for clarity and introduce the characters and settings right in the beginning.
I felt the Old Norse, Old English, and Scottish vibe immediately, and love the name Ylva. I used it in my story too, because it's the feminine version of "young wolf" and fits my character. There aren't enough Goblin Stories, and I greatly enjoyed this one.
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