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Review by Violet D Clyne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think the concept of the poem is very good. I think it is a little wordy. Remember choose your words carefully when writing poetry, and try to convey a powerful message in as few words as possible. Very inspirational though! Keep writing!
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Review by Violet D Clyne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This poem was very powerful! I would advise some editing on the form, it didn't flow like it could.
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Review by Violet D Clyne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very powerful poem. The message is sad, and you can really tell its written from a kid's point of view
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