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Review of Unity  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It just seems as if it needs more. Other than that, I truly enjoyed this!
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Review of Mother Teresa  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Mother Teresa indeed inspired many over the generations of her life! I find the rhyme a little too neat but still enjoyed the poem. It shows your heart.
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Review of seasonal poetry  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good. I enjoyed the play on words in the middle!
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Review of Fear  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting and dark poem. Wow!
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Review of Fire  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written! I enjoyed this poem, MorningFlower.
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written. With this, you step back into Bible times. You see David's frustration and the reassurance he receives from God - his God. I enjoyed this glimpse into David's life while he hid from Saul. Well done!
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Review of Pattern Blindness  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is quite well written. I enjoyed the images you created with words. Well done!
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well done, Dean! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem!
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The phrase 'One bite, one flight' being repeated gives potency to this poem. Well done.
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Review of Stuck  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I honestly don't approve of using language in writing however, you used it at two key places. There is a solution for feeling stuck. Keep seeking it out.
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
That's a poem that definitely came from pain. Continue praying. You never know what God will do! He is faithful.
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Review of Unfinished  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hmm, interesting, Matthew. I'd like to see this when it's finished!
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this whymsical description of snow in winter time. Quite good.
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Review of The punching bag  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting... Writing is a good way to express how we feel, even if it's dark anger and fear. It's extremely hard to go through times when all we want is to end the pain and anger. What if there was a light through this darkness? Not only just a light but the Light? Have you ever heard of Casting Crown's song, 'Set Me Free'? It's very encouraging. Anyway, I enjoyed the poem. It truly showed where you are at.
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Review of The Song  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written love poem on saying 'goodbye'. I enjoyed it!
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Review of Hope  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hope is definitely key in life. This poem is a very good reminder.
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Review of Bend  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very intriguing poem on the fight against cancer. It seems as if the poet has almost lost hope yet he's encouraging the person with cancer not to give in. It's hard to lose a loved one. I know... Well, I hope that this helps.
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Review of Savage Angels  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good. Interesting. Is this based on real experience or is it all imagination?
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A Haiku is always fun to create! Especially 'true haiku' which, like yours are about nature. Very good.
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Review of Depression  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Solid ending and does indeed give readers a taste of the suffering of depression.
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Review of Eye Of The Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting. My only wish is that you hadn't double spaced each line. Other than that, I it's a great piece!
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Review of The Wood's Tale  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very good in that it reaches the heart of those that serve our Lord. Keep writing!
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Review of The Storm  Open in new Window.
Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This shows your heart. It truly holds promise. Faith in the Lord can be extremely hard at times and often we forget that those trials are opportunities to grow. Don't forget the rainbows.
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Review by Michaela Elliott Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting... I think I see where this may end up...
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