I really enjoy writing about memories and the tokens of memory that either keep it alive or keep it guessing. This poem is about just that, and the topic is intriguing. There is a sense of conversation in the poem that is welcoming, but can also be somewhat facetious if not carefully balanced. My suggestion is to find that balance between conversation and imagery (other than just the bracelet). It's a great topic and a good start! Thank you for sharing!
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