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Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not a published author nor am I an expert reviewer. My comments are my opinion. And an opinion is just that, an opinion. Overall I liked the poem and the message it conveys. The only suggestion that I have is that perhaps the poem could be expanded. These emotions kill more than just friendships, therefore a broader scope as to how we as people are affected in all relationships by these emotions would make this piece pack more of a punch,.
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