I must say i had a good laugh at this one and i do understand the trails and tribulations of the passy given that i believe this refers to a pacifier (Soother). However i must say i have been lucky with my daughter so far and she more or less willingly gave it up. It is a very nice poem well done i enjoyed it tremendously.
Ps i rue the day my daughter gives birth to a passy loving darling...
Raw that about as much as anyone needs to say. Raw emotion is powerful and yet revealing i have to say i know how that feels although on differnt terms. Make a better tommorow to clean the past although lest we forget our memories will surly follow.
Enjoyed read it although some what ranty but when things come from other places besides our mind it usaly feels that way.
I would have to say that is at least from what I can tell an interesting depiction of a man dying. A sweet release from torment of many, the color of red is a plenty. I would have to say i enjoyed it so, formatted well and free of woe. Continue to write and enjoy it too for I did and so should you.
Regards XainFaith.
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