I really really enjoyed the detail that was so well thought out into the story. I liked the mystery and suspense that was put into it and I it was an excellent story overall. A pet peeve of mine is when people use contractions when there is not dialogue and you had some in there but other than that, I think you did excellent and that it was really well written. It was very good. Excellent job.
XOXO
~rain-kissed_midnight
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