EOIWriting's (youtube18511) Reviews

EOIWriting

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20 Public Reviews Given

21 Total Reviews Given

Review Style

Keep in mind that I am by no means a professional. I am honest about my feedback and criticisms. I enjoy deep and thought-provoking poems/stories as well as well thought out characters.

I'm good at...

Giving praise and providing feedback whenever necessary.

Favorite Genres

Any except erotica.

Least Favorite Genres

Erotica

Favorite Item Types

Poems and short stories.

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#4418243

Review of Don't Darken The Rainbow

Review by EOIWriting

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really liked this piece.

It flowed really well and you got your point across flawlessly. Save for a couple of grammatical/spelling errors.

"We'd apreciate" appreciate*
"From the days and mounths" months*

Additionally not every line in the poem needs to start with a capital. :)
If the sentence from one line carries on from the next, you don't need to capitalize.

Overall I really enjoyed this piece. It's expertly written except from a couple grammatical issues. However from a poetic standpoint, your message comes across clear and it's superb!

Great job and keep writing!

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#4415509

Review of Time is Ticking

Review by EOIWriting

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I liked this free form poem. The incorporation of time is something I've been considering in my own poetry.

The imagery is really top notch and even though the poem is short, it's still really good!

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#4048106

Review of Alone

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

A nice poem.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4047793

Review of End of Time

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

This was a good read. Though not perfect, it grabbed my attention from the start and I was satisfied at the end...that's it...satisfied. I understand you're a newbie (I am too), but I try to not make my reviews more forgiving for newbies, just because I feel all people should have their work criticized or praised equally.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

5

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#4044522

Review of Goodnight to the Restless

Review by EOIWriting

Rated: E

| (1.0)

Very short and contains nothing to grab the reader's attention. If you're going to sample something, make it interesting, make it grab the reader by the throat and have hit nearly strangle the reader to death. It needs to be exciting. I had trouble reading this, even though it was only three lines, due to being bored...I hate being bored.

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#4043196

Review of Chernobyl Lonely Heart's Club by Sparky

Review by EOIWriting

Rated: 13+

| (1.0)

Nice job with showing, rather than telling, but that's all there is. I actually had to put forth an effort to finish reading this. The scene dragged on way too long and I feel that you were too focused on bragging about how smart you are ("Oh look, I can say BIG words!") than you were actually trying to write a short story.
0.5/5 Stars