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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hm. I like the poem overall. I thought it deserved a 4 because although the rhythm was good, I feel you could of said more about image. And sound I feel you just left out completely. I'm not trying to put you down or anything. I mean I have a completely different writing style than you. Yours is a bit darker than mine ever will be, but good job on that. It works for you. It's a great poem regardless I just think you could do better if you added more detail.

- Zach Herrmann
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