Clever rhyming in this aabb poem. I enjoyed the little boy truly enjoying his simple pleasure, so excited to share this with his father. With an offhand remark, all the joy and interest just disappeared. People sometimes don't realize that a little thoughtless remark can cause such a ripple of disappointment and sadness. On the other hand, a simple remark complimenting a child can last for years, giving them confidence and a positive feeling from just a genuine remark, cheers zanzigirl
How clever. A wonderful story of three brother's journey to 'America' and a recipe. I like stories that tell of people's lives, choices and how they roll with whatever life gives them. The best laid plans and all that. Sometimes it seems that we have failed, then a little tweaking or advice can get you back on an even better track. I enjoyed this, cheers zanzigirl
A fun story of a young boy and his lucky penny. Just believing something is lucky, or that everything will be safe because of a little charm, works because we put positive energy out. You have given us a glimpse into one boys day. I would have liked a bit more description of the castle is the only thing I would say, cheers zanzigirl
A poem with a message. You create a believable situation and Maria is strong in her convictions. Young people need to be aware of the dangers of unprotected sex. It is a rough time with hormones and peer pressure. Girls sometime feel pressured, and have to realize the impact this situation can have tomorrow. Emotional, physical and mental impact.. If he loves you so much today... he will still love you tomorrow, Bravo Maria, cheers zanzigirl
This is a cute poem with a message. Perhaps if man could hear the distress from the animals around us, there would be more respect and compassion for them. Bravo, I enjoyed this, zanzigirl
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