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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Writer Of Life

One love –a child perhaps, our God, ourselves (created) narrows down to our newborn or possible a merger of sorts.

Living in the moment – such words of wisdom. Looking into the next – Words of hope.

Stronger in faith – how unheard of this community of belief amongst two (wonderful I might add as well as jealous)

Our hands on this world – what a gripping statement Such Power, Such Pleasure (When does the pain come?)

The Sky, The Stars, Their Keepers – Sighhhhh… The direction we were intended Beautiful
Any Previous… Amazing to have found a love amongst no comparison other than our own.

Life Partners – Interesting… Does this… Is This… Can This… I mean did you win the lottery or what…

Waves – Nice and clean here. Mountains – hop on my shoulders love it.

We use the past – Wonderful entire line… However is this not dangerous to USE the past? Such skill involved a precision of something I am sure… Scary thought to venture back to a holding of such magnitude. (Be careful)

Eternal Flame… Engulf – Very elegant may I ask you sound … Skip that thought… Burning nice how does one keep from getting burnt if one should engulf? Just a thought…

Embrace… Nice but scary

Fill me…. Leave this one alone, speaks for itself.

Mirror reflection – Climax, climax, climax. Such power, such sincerity. Reflection turned inside out becomes?

I have enjoyed 4 write on this site so far and yours is the only (ONE) worthy of a review in my eye (so far).

Just one question if I may? Is this love of time passed or ONE still standing the tests of time?

Zepplin Prey
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