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Review of Drown in tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Of course, like you said, it needs work. I see potential but I'm sure you can add more than that. You should try to keep the lines in similar length and maybe give it a better flow to it. Do all that and you should be fine. Your words have deep meaning andimpact upon the reader. I would love to read it when it's refurbished and finished, Sincerely, Mr.Hans
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Review of I Saw a Dragon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem. I really loved it. However, I feel as though you could have extended it or ended it stronger. Overall a really great poem.
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