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Review of Our Little Trek.  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Nice one. Imagery is one of your strong points. I would add some more detail. It feels like a scene, complete but still a mystery. The ending is nice too. It feels a bit pessimestic though. Wouldnt it be encouraging to see her feel stronger by acquiring the spirit of "living life to its fullest" of her dead beloved?
Write on!
Restless Soul
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Review of Angelic Kisses  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the vocabulary. And I enjoyed your scenery. The contrasts were beautiful and vivid. Now I understand the power of colors. The ending is so true.
Write on.
Restless Soul
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Lungs of Earth" : amazing. The message is true, but few of us hear.
Write on,
Resltess Soul
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Review of Political Will  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very Good! The poem is near perfect in rhyme and logic. Keep writing. I loved the political powers and publishing based on that idea. Poems that cut like a knife: neat line! "cakewalk": funny:) Did the mayor publish based on his talent?
Amusing
Restless Soul
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Review of Winter Colors  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this one the best:
As the sun's rays danced
Offering a delightful show
and ofcourse the last sentence was beautiful too.
Vivid.
Write on!
Restless Soul
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wonderful twist. Extreme rivalry for sure but the best man did win! I like the dialogues and the character descriptions. Shocking in the end. Good work!
Write on
Restless Soul
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good one. I liked the twist. I could never have guessed. I thought Diane was the vulnerable one! Do check for some typos like Dlane and tradiition.
Write on!
Restless Soul
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Review of Group Therapy  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hilarious!!
So good. I did not expect Bob to be the doctor. Poor Cedric! I like your dialogues too, they tell the most of the story.
Keep it coming friend!
Restless Soul
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Seems like you are intimidated by racism in your personal vicinity. You have expressed it well. i wish you would believe that you are special. May writing will help reveal that:)
Write on friend
Restless Soul
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Review of The Salesman  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked it. You had me hooked right ot the end. I think I could predict the reason behind the smell, but you revealed the surprise well. Good job!
Restless Soul
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Review of Nill  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice one. Deep stuff. Keep writing!
RS
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Review of Mom's Poem  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Miss you mommy!
Thanks for sharing. I guess the feeling is universal.. well put, keep writing
RS
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with you. Religion provides the kind of wisdom one acquires in a million years...
Write on friend!
RS
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Review of The Smell of Fear  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful! so funny but serious too:) An applause for Granny. I enjoyed it.
RS
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Review of Birthday Doubles  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply put and smooth flowing. I liked it all. The warmth of birthday joys in a family. Excellent use of the prompt too. Burning both ends of our candle (smiles)
Write on
Restless soul
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Review of Wonderful Things  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
AWESOME
Just the picture to imagine the wasted life of a druggie. Good work. Write on!
Zubia
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Review of Not In The Mood  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Goodness:) Whata piece. Funny and so clever. Write on!
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
How exciting. Great job!
Write on!
Zubia
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely! Nice lesson and great reflection. Write on!
Zubia
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Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
What I liked most about this piece was the economic use of words in place of many. You have expressed several lines of prose in just one line. Thats is an art itself. Words like brandishing a mediocre philosophy and lazy and faint-hearted optimism, are deep and makes me think of several examples in political history. I also like the idea that you think we should pusue our challenges with a passion, or by working hard, not just through might or will. We should actively work towards our goals. You also talk about world peace by stating the current affairs...human casualties and graceless forebearance. Very nicely put.
Your poem is encouraging the human race to work towards humanity. Write on!
Zubia
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Review of Resolution...less  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That's exactly what we all do, isnt it? Nicely put. Write on!
Zubia
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Review of LIVING FOR MYSELF  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written and well expressed. I feel for you my friend. A wise decision is never too late:)
Write on!
Zubia
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Review of The Old Pine  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
And I am sure it is here that you find a muse to write so well. I am truly enchanted by your hide out!
Write on!
Zubia
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Review of The Forgotten  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You really got me. This was aperfect tale and feel this was real. Good job. I have a four and a half year old son. I am off to hug and kiss him:)
Write on
Zubia
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Review of Mark  Open in new Window.
Review by Restless Soul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
QAmazing description of the bar scenes, the effect of booze, Mark's preference as he aged and how he aged. Intriguing..
Write on!
Zubia
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