I think this could be a good poem. I'm interested to read suggestions. |
Sometimes people say the things they mean to And it leaves an X mark upon the ground These straight-line thinkers speaking their truths And leaving their breath on the air. They are the tall paintings in chapels where he stood, For months transforming the ceiling; On a ladder, missing the steps. Their sense is like a spider’s web, all connected thread, stitching the internal and external. We run at speed. Language becomes dipped and garish. Altogether something else, like chicken scratchings Instead of Bible Scriptures, and we leave missing… Something. The TV is on the news in the mornings, Toast, shower, brushed teeth, through the house, Public transport departing, the train jolting past scenery. Tarmac, suits and execs, youths in vacated spaces hanging around the soda aisles and multiplexes. Sometimes I wonder who is making the right decisions. Waterloo station, the silent rushed spaces between Concave portraits and the lonely condemnation Of self, social selves, and superstructures. Platforms and shopping arenas, the homeless For the words stuck in a hole On their own, not mattering And occasionally meeting somewhere in between. |