Positivity

Note: I wrote this poem for my mom, pretty much just out of the blue so I'm not sure how well it works. I'd appreciate all creative criticism and help improving.

Positivity

Breath and dance,
Kiss the clouds that rain on your face,
Embrace the darkness that swallows your soul.
You are not alone.
Your are a fighter,
An inspiration,
A life giver.
Take a step back,
Look at what you have created.
Look at the beauty that blossoms in your eyes.
Sing and live,
Laugh at the bird that dirtied your windscreen,
Wave at the man who parks in your space.
You are a women,
A mother,
And you are not alone.