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by leia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: · Other · Children's · #1228145
A murdder, mystory story with some spelling misstakes
Natelie Leles climed onto the boat, there was no sign of sruggle or mudder. But somehow Natelie knew that her uncle's body was somewhere. She surched the boat for any evidence, all she found was a black mark on the floor bourds. It looked like the mark was made by fire, but Natelie couldn't be sure. She climed onto the small moter boat that she had here with, then her asistent Jack asked "found anything? No not yet, she replied, but we'll find some thing soon, she added. With that they went back home, well Jack went home, but Natelie had to ask a few questions to ask first.

Even she knew very well that her aunty sue didn't do the crime she went to ask her a question. Driving very carefully, because it was a snowy night she finally got to aunty sue's house. Aunty sue was already outside, waiting for her, arms sreached out for a hug. Aunty sue was well er a big women who wore, big pink wolly jumpers, long purple skerts or trousers and big baggy satern under-ware. Anyway when Natelie and aunty sue were comfy Natelie disided to ask the question. She started like this, Um aunty sue you know how i've been hired to envestergate about uncle's death, well i thought that maybe i could ask you a question to help me. The thing is what did uncle say just before he left? Well just before left he said ' I hope we see each other again and then he left. Thanks Sue i said and left. I had one more place to go, the old pub that uncle used to go to. There was old Fredd, just the persom i wanted. I walked up to him and said. Hey old Fredd you know my uncle did he fiset the pub before he left? After a moment of thinking old Fredd said' aktuly yes he gave me five hundred dollers and then set out to sea, left with out a word he did, left with out a word.

The next day Natelie went down to the ship in with her uncle was murddered in. This time she surched ofer to the side of the ship were the eqwipment was kept. As she steped on the floor bourd with the black mark the floor gave way and she fell down, down, down in to a dark hallway, the wall stained with blood and black marks like the one on the floor bourd. She followed the hallway and found too skelletons. One had a macth in his and the other partly burnt.
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