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He’s a ragtag kind of slob pulls his look together with a pawn shop fedora, cheap beer in hand. They call him Boston, but he’s from Sacramento, suburb outskirts where he smokes on the fire escape on Smog Alert days. I ask what he’s all about. He grunts, slides me a shot, half slopping out of the glass. Then a second, a fourth. Half of one. He’s run out. Anti-Galileo, Speaking of stars and their arrangements as bullshit. He’s a Libra (for the record). I tell him of being wrapped in chords sung by choirs, sounds so divine, and he scoffs. “That’s not beauty, that’s pageantry.” We part as strangers on the subject. I detest his snarky, roguish smirk - how dirty it makes my skin. He flicks me a ciggie, lights his own. “I don’t smoke.” Yet, it’s delicious. Savory to feel so tainted. My devil delights, smoldering on my shoulder. He dubs me ‘Memphis.’ “Why?” The train gust knocks his hat to the slushy tiles. “Criminals belong there. Like us.” “I’m not a criminal.” He disagrees, “You are now.” And maybe there’s no danger in hitchhiking to Arizona, in practicing everything I don’t believe. I’m acquainted with these boots now, prone to their unorthodox step. Alone with a city I know nothing about. |