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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1644582
This is my first attempt at writing in German, tell me if it sounds alright? Thanks!
Das helle Licht verklang;
Die Sonne scheint nicht mehr;
In dieser Welt, wo nichts bleiber kann;
Wenn weiss, stirbt zum dunkelsten grauen

Ich hasse alles;
Ich liebe nichts mehr;
Lassen Sie mich nicht hier bleiben;
In Ihrer mitleidsvollen Sorge...

Sorry if the German is bad, I've never done this sort of thing and I can only speak a little bit of the language... I hope to learn more(I have time considering I am only 16)
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