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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Dark · #1693796
My contest entry for ~*Crimson Twilight*~ Poetry Contest
Darkness Taking Over


Darkness can easily invade your thoughts.
Darkness can easily invade your thouhgts.
Sorrowful bloody tears fall unnoticed.
Sorrowful bloody tears fall unnoticed.
Unnoticed sorrowful darkness can invade your tears.
Bloody thoughts easily fall.


The sadist inside escaping, hard to be kept in, but cannot touch.
The sadist inside escaping, hard to be kept in, but cannot touch.
Yet unintended and intended actions even sayings come out.
Yet unintended and intended actions even sayings come out.
Intended and unintended sadist cannot be kept inside, escaping.
The actions come out but yet even hard to touch.


The innocent flower falling apart, becomes black, and grows thorns.
The innocent flower falling apart, becomes black, and grows thorns.
Drops of blood driping down from the beautiful melancholic flower.
Drops of blood driping down from the beautiful melancholic flower.
From innocent flower becomes and grows the beautiful melancholic flower.
Falling apart, drops of blood driping down the black thorns.


Darkness can easily fall unnoticed.
Sorrowful bloody tears invade your thoughts.
The sadist inside escaping, yet unintended and intended.
Actions even sayings come out, hard to be kept in, but cannot touch.
Grows thorns, driping drops of blood down from the black flower.
Falling apart and innocent becomes the beautiful melancholic flower.






I think this is how you do a paradelle from what i understood ... but sorry if it not how a paradelle suppose to be.

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