This is an allegory on emotional commitment written in anapestic tetrameter. |
In the land where I live is a city so fair That discovered a spice quite exceedingly rare. And the caravans traveled from far distant grounds Just to trade for this spice and return to their towns. As the spice legend grew which is always the way All the thieves and the rogues sought to steal it away. In defense of our treasure we chose one and all To protect our fair city by building a wall. Now this wall was much higher than any had been And the portals so sturdy that thieves can't get in. But I also must warn with a bit of a tear That the caravans haven't been here for a year. Edited for PDG Poetry Workshop In the land where I live is a city so fair That discovered a spice quite exceedingly rare. And the caravans traveled from far distant grounds Just to sample this spice and return to their towns. As the spice legend grew which is always the way An occasional rogue sought to steal it away. In defense of our treasure we chose one and all To protect our fair city by building a wall. Now this wall was much higher than any had been And the portals prevented the thieves coming in. Now we're safe and secure from the threats that we feared But the caravan visits have all disappeared. Revision Written for: "Paper Pal Poetry " |