The darkness of my past revealed in a poem. please give criticism |
Feel the sun on your face Chase your dreams to the end of the earth This is the time and place For your plans to be moving forth Dream on you insane gem stone We love you you crazy fool Don’t go off and be alone Come with us we’ll get lifted at the pool Take a moment to reflect on life And the mysteries that we may never know Pray or not pray love your wife goddess of love with cupids bow Believe in yourself when you fail You may learn something if you listen Pick yourself up no longer pale Prepare a pot of coffee in the kitchen You can do it if you believe That failure is successful learning About what not to do Never go down for a fifth Of irish whiskey and wine Twenty dollars cash and you my friend Have become a street walker Enjoy the simple things in life Like sunsets and cool spring days And autumns return to the leaves of the trees Okay comrade The past is the past Forget about the background check Just be the new you who doesn’t go to jail Who has a family and a mini van Enjoy the family life So stressful and fun One day the government won’t own you. |