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Rated: E · Poetry · Experience · #2083300
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What is a family like?

A family is like the strength of the father
the one who cares and protects with
all his heart, and lets ideas flow like
rivers

But what is a family like?

A family is like the heart of the mother
the one who earns her place and rights
and will never stop fighting to protect

But what is a family like?

A family is the loyalty of the brother(s)
who protects you when your weak
and fights when your too powerful

But what is a family like?

A family is like the love of the sister(s)
who love with all their hearts
and teach you to love with all your hearts
so you may grow and learn

But what is a family like?

A family is like the wiseness of the grandparents
who teach you how to behave
who might be stern
but will always love you
no matter what

But what is a family like?

A family is like you
You grow and learn with family
Make important discoveries
Prevent disasters
Love

But what is a family like?

A family is love
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