Shakespearean Sonnet?

Hi! Me again with another Romeo poem from Romeo and Juliet. I need all the feedback I can get, thank you!

He is in love with a very hot girl.
The girl is a Capulet; a bad guy.
But she looks like an Ethiop's ear pearl.
After, he looks at night skies, with a sigh.
But then his girl, Juliet, comes and talks.
She said she wants love, from the boy too.
They were idols of eastern orthodox.
Too bad both their families were like Jews.
He tells her that he will send a message.
Tommorow, at the stroke of nine o'clock.
However, we all have a bad presage.
Worse, than getting a bad writer's block.
They will get married that night with Friar.
However, he tells him, it may be dire...