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Rated: 18+ · Fiction · Action/Adventure · #2308075
A group of friends are subjected to the horrors of their friends little sisters gut.
So just a quick introduction. The characters will be a group of friends Sam, Lily, Ella, Mia, and Hannah. They are all around the age of 13 or 14 except Ella. Sam has medium-length brown hair and brown eyes. Lily and Ella are sisters, Ella is 9 and is just tagging along with Lily. Both girls have darkish blond hair that is rather long, and they have green eyes as well. Mia has a darker complexion and short brown hair and brown eyes. Hannah has long red hair and blue eyes and is the cousin of Sam. Sam has a little sister who is around the age of 5. Her name is Ava, and she has long brown hair and brown eyes. She was asked to watch her for the day and the night while their parents were out of town. Across the street from their house is where Hannah lives with Sam’s aunt.



A group of friends were hanging out one day bored out of their minds. There were 5 of them in this group, they were at Sam’s house since she had a little sister that needed to be watched for the night. As the five of them sat there thinking of what they had to do and pondered some fun ideas.

“So, there is absolutely nothing on TV so that’s out of the question.” Mia says as she shuts the TV off and lays back with a sigh.

“Yeah, really sucks we have to stay here and watch Ava. We should just send her over to Hannahs house so we can go out somewhere else.” Lily says to the group as she looks around for anyone to agree.

“No, we have to stay here and watch Ava. I told my mom I would, and she got us a bunch of snacks as payment already.” Sam responded to Lily. This elicited an eye roll from Lily as she got up and grabbed some snacks from the kitchen. She comes back with a device that Sam’s mom had picked up from the store earlier. Lily inspects it and sees that it’s labeled a shrink ray. The device has a knob that turns to adjust the size you want the object to be shrunk to. She just fidgets with it and sets it to 1 foot and pretends to fire it at her sister Ella, but it goes off accidentally. The room is basked in a green glow of the device as it shoots out a beam and shrinks down Ella to 1 foot. This caused all the girls in the room to scream.

“WHAT DID YOU DO?!?” Ella yells out to her sister as she starts to sob. “Calm down that was an accident here I’ll reverse you back to normal.” Lily says a little flustered but changed her sister back to her normal height.

“Is that the shrink ray? How did you get that?” Sam asks Lily. “Your mom must have gotten it from the store. It was just out in the kitchen.” Lily responds as she sets down her chocolate pudding. Ava comes out to see what was going on.

“That scared me what are you doing sissy?” Ava asks as she goes up to Sam so she can pick her up. “We were just messing with a shrink ray mom bought.” Sam responded to Ava. “Can I please play with it?” Ava says with puppy dog eyes. “Sure, here try it out.” Lily says as she gives the little girl the shrink ray. Ava immediately shrinks Lily down to 1 centimeter in height. “She’s really tiny!!!” Ava says. Sam sets her down so they can inspect Lily. “Wow yeah she is tiny enough to eat even.” Sam says as she smacks her lips as a joke. With this Ava picks up Lily and swallows her whole. “You’re right big sis! She was yummy!”

The group just looks at Ava stunned for a second. “AVA! WE NEED TO GO GRAB SOMETHING TO MAKE HER VOMIT!!!” Sam yells as she picks up Ava and takes her to the bathroom. The group just stays there stunned for a second before following after her. As they huddle around Ava in the bathroom Hannah goes and grabs the manual for the shrink ray. “Looks like you are safe from acid while shrunk. Says a few incidents occurred already so that functionality is required by law now. Looks like you can go weeks with air too since it stays in your body after shrinking wow!” Hannah interjects as she reads the manual. Mia quickly calls Lily, “Hey are you digesting in there? Well, that’s good to know. Huh kind of like a swimming pool? Well then one sec.” Mia says on the phone before hanging up. “Seems like you’re right you can’t digest, and she said it’s actually really fun in there. You know we could join her for fun? One of us stays out just in case and the rest of us mess around inside her belly. In an hour or so we just call and have Ava puke us out." Mia proposes to the group. Everyone but Sam is really interested so they just make her stay with Ava and wait for them to call. Ella, Mia, and Hannah all shrink down and jump in Lilys pudding for Ava to eat up with them included. The three of them are swallowed down into the little kid’s belly.

“Well Ava do you feel weird at all?” Sam asks Ava as she sits on the couch holding her. “Nope! It feels funny because they keep tickling me inside!” Ava tells her sister. “Well then let’s watch a movie while they have fun swimming.” Sam says with a giggle as she pats Ava's belly.

Inside Ava
Inside the stomach of Ava its pitch black and due to the pudding, a sweet smell is in the air. A slight putrid odor emanates around but it’s bearable for the group. Slight grumbles echo all around the girls as they swim in the pudding concoction. As new acid began to enter the belly the girls’ clothes digest away very quickly but since they feel nothing, they continue swimming around. As they swim the entire chamber rattles with the patting from Sam then it rests again. The girls are slightly startled for a second and a few of them swim towards the edges just in case. In the process the girls are separated with Hannah and Ella unknowingly swimming directly towards the entrance into Avas small intestine. Lily and Mia meet up on the opposite side of the stomach. Groans echo around them as the stomach begins to empty the pudding and Ella and Hannah are going along for the ride.

As the acid started to settle the girls took a second to think about the situation. None of them were freaking out but definitely on edge. All around them were groans and other noises. Ava’s heartbeat drowned out the rest of the sound so to them all they heard was the sounds inside her. It was also pitch black and when their clothes melted, they also lost their phones which presented a new issue. Hannah began feeling around and grabbed onto Ella.

“Hey who’s over here next to me?” Hannah said into the darkness. “Its me.” Ella responded. They could feel a slight current, but they were still able to keep moving. Ella, however, wasn’t a great swimmer and was mostly just staying afloat. The girls grabbed onto each other and got stuck in a stronger current. “What’s going on! I’m scared!” Ella said as she began to flail in the acid. “Calm down before you make this situation worse. My only guess is we are being sucked into her small intestine.” Hannah told her. This only made Ella flail even more, which prevented Hannah from doing much in the situation. As it became apparent that they were stuck in the current Hannah wrapped her arms around Ella to keep them together and made her hold her breath as they were sucked down into the small intestine.

Outside Ava
Ava changed into some pajamas while Sam grabbed some snacks from the kitchen. She put up the shrink ray for later and got a movie going. All of the snacks she gave Ava were soft just to make sure nothing bad happened to the girls. All the movement following the belly pat was causing a commotion inside, but the two sisters were completely oblivious. They just started eating snacks and watching a movie. Ava could feel some weird things in her belly but ignored them and kept watching the movie.

Inside Ava
Lily and Mia held onto each other as the entire stomach started squeezing and shifting due to the little girl’s movement. When she eventually settled down the two tiny girls were met with a barrage of food from the ceiling of the stomach. They didn’t have any time to find the other two let alone find their phones. The stomach acid slowly rose as Ava continued eating snacks, but the acid was also draining quicker causing the two girls to slowly start to get sucked towards the small intestine. All Ava feels is a slight bubbling in her belly and then it settled. For the small girls inside though it’s a torrent of acid as the belly continues to fill up with acid and the draining only intensifies.

“Alright hold on to me, we’re going down it looks like.” Lily said to Mia as they tried to compose themselves before entering the small intestine. Upon entering the small intestine, the two girls are thrown about by the steady flow of acid with each pulse of the sphincter. The flow quickly stopped as the twists and turns of the small intestine began. All around the girls are things pushing them along the intestine, all the while tickling them constantly. They hit a glob of food which separates the two of them as they continue through the small intestine. At this point they begin to realize the rather crappy situation they are in. A long way awaits them as they are slowly pulled through the small intestine.

The other two girls, Hannah and Ella, have held onto each other and have slowly been surrounded by excess from the small intestine. Due to being surrounded by debris the two are unable to communicate so they just stay holding on as they are slowly pulled along Ava’s digestive track.

Outside Ava
2 hours after the girls entered Ava the movie ends, and Sam gets up and goes to the bathroom. She comes back and immediately notices the time.

“OMG we completely forgot about the girls!!!” Sam yells as she rushes and grabs her phone. No calls or anything. Ava at this point is asleep so she’s of no help to Sam. Sam puts her ear up to Ava’s belly and listens to the weird gurgling sounds, hoping somehow to hear a scream or a yell of some kind but nothing. Just the groaning and squelching of a little girls belly. Sam pulls up Ava’s pajama shirt and just feels around and listens. Nothing of note. She ponders what course of action to take. She decides to let nature take its course since the only option is to make her sister vomit which might cause more harm than good. So long as they aren’t digested everything will be fine, she thinks. In the morning Ava will go to the bathroom and they will be free. While being a nervous mess Sam picks up her sister and brings her to her bedroom. Now she just has to wait and hope everything is fine…


If my friends were to die inside the gut of my little sister would that be murder? I mean if we just dispose of the remains then how would they know? What am I saying those are my friends in there, I shouldn’t be thinking this! All this rushes through Sam’s head as she paces around in the hallway outside of her room. Inside Ava is fast asleep completely unaware of the journey going on inside her gut. Every small twist and turn she makes in her sleep causes more chaos for the inhabitants of her intestines.

Inside Ava
As an hour or so has now passed the situations the girls are in have changed drastically. Hannah and Ella have slowly been able to pry away pieces of nondigested material as they’ve traveled through the small intestine. They’ve stayed with this lump of food for a time but as they get closer and closer to the large intestine they’ve been forced to a slow crawl as the last remains of nutrients are sucked from the lump. Lily on the other hand has been moving quickly through the intestine but getting slowed by globs everywhere so she’s about half an hour behind the two at the front. Mia got stuck a while ago and didn’t come loose for quite a while, so she is about ten minutes behind Lily.

Another hour later, Hannah and Ella reach the large intestine. They are freed from the food glob and are finally able to communicate with each other.

“THAT WAS INSANE! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!” Hannah yells as she hugs Ella as they just keep holding onto each other. The smell has gotten bad but bearable for now. “We must be at the large intestine which means the next few hours will probably be the worse experience of our lives.” Hannah says to Ella. Ella just collapses and starts crying. Hannah collects herself and picks up the girl and starts the last trek of the journey.

Outside Ava
After freaking out for a while Sam eventually calms herself down and examines her sister’s belly to make sure no bulges have occurred or anything. She decides to lock the bathroom door to make sure if Ava wakes up first, she will have to wake up Sam before going number 2. She pulls down Ava’s pajama pants and checks to make sure nothing/no one is in them yet. Nope, nothing. So, she takes off Ava’s pajamas entirely so if the girls get out while they are asleep, they can get out of the way of getting crushed inside a sleeping five-year-olds panties. She lays in bed and rubs her sister’s head for a bit before turning off the lights and going to sleep.

Inside Ava
Another hour went by, Hannah went as far as she could with Ella but wasn’t strong enough to get all the way to the exit so they both laid down together and took a nap. In this time Lily got to the large intestine and curled up waiting for a while until eventually Mia popped into the large intestine.

“This has been way too much for me to handle. I’m covered in random stuff and I’m sticky all over. For the love of god, I just want to get out of here!” Mia said to Lily as they embraced for a second. “Well since it’s dryer here and smells way worse I’d guess this is the large intestine. Still got a way to go but at least we can walk the rest of the way here.” Lily told her. “Well, I think in due time we will get to the worst of this depending on when Ava goes to the bathroom.” Mia said aloud, which caused the two to shudder a little. So, they continued moving. Hannah and Ella unfortunately over the course of a few more hours got pulled along with accumulating waste and got compacted into it. As the hours went by and Mia and Lily began trekking through more and more shit everywhere they came upon the worst of the large intestine. Waste was accumulating into turds around them and caused the two to vomit and cry due to the intense smell. They covered their mouths and slowly moved as tears accumulated in their eyes. Slowly they got trapped between turds and were forced to slide around the one in front of them. They were able to move forward a little more until they realized they were nearing the end and would be fully trapped between shit as it moved through the end of Ava’s bowels. In front of them they saw something moving in the piece of shit and noticed it was the other two girls, they quickly pulled them free and hugged each other.

“Thank god you are alright!” Lily said as she hugged her little sister. “I’m glad we all found each other before we got to the exit. I was hoping we could just slip out into Ava’s underwear, but it seems like we will have to wait for her to go to the bathroom.” Mia said to the group. As they talked for a bit groaning and tensing started to occur in the area and the two shits combined around them forcing them to grab hold of each other as they kept each other from getting crushed. All the while thinking the same thing, how much they didn’t want to wait much longer to get out of this hell. Unfortunately, they would need to wait another hour or two as shit slowly accumulated in Ava’s bowels. All the while she was completely unaware.

Outside Ava
Most of the night Sam spent holding her little sister. As the hours went by and the group slowly travelled through Ava’s digestive track the two sisters slept. After a few hours Sam woke up and had to calm herself down again. All the while holding her little sister and rubbing her belly to hopefully quicken her friend’s journey. This caused Ava’s abdomen to tense up for a second as she let out a quick little toot of a fart. For the girls inside this pushed them the final stretch of the way and the smell and gas in the air forced all of them to pass out. Later Ava wakes up groggy. “I need to go to the bathroom.” She tells her sister. Sam puts her on a bucket, so the poop does go into the sewer on accident. Sam watches as Ava does her business and can only imagine how bad the hell was that the girls went through inside her sister’s belly. Ava goes and gets cleaned up and gets clothes on. Sam meanwhile puts on some gloves and fishes through the poop and pee to find her friends. She finds everyone but Ella who during the process got separated and stuck up inside Ava further. Using a glove and a flashlight Sam is able to look inside Ava’s butt and find Ella. She cleans the four tiny girls off and gets them grown back to normal size. They all talk about the torture they went through; all the while Sam was worried but underestimated just how bad it was. The girls in turn confiscated the shrink ray and forced Sam to experience the hell of a journey that is her little sister’s digestive system. This time, however, she skipped right to the end as the girls forced her to go up Ava’s butt for a whole night. After a night up their Sam realized the extent of horror they experienced, and they turned off the shrink ray for good to make sure nothing like this could ever happen to them again.
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