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(Poem)They have need revolution with description.
There is more darkness,
A candle is nothing without lighter it is so sadness!.
This night is going to so deeper, some evil would capture their soul,

It is a care fullness! to make their opportune to get their goal.

In the sky has a moon which is unobvious due to clouds,
There have coming lot of dangerous- animal's awful -sounds.

They have been ridden more mountains and rivers, now, getting rest,
There have nothing in this jungle at this night do to their best.

So , they have need more revolution ! more revolution! more revolution!
Their have need find their way! find their way! And find their destination.


Description of this poem:
In this poem revolutionary soul is like a great journey maker who have travlled through difficult way like mountains,river these type of path are not flat so that the out come is : for a revolutionary soul have lots of destructive path.

and after long distances traveling ,these souls are getting rest in a jungle so,when travellers do travel these type of difficult path like mountains,river because of these
Normally,they get rest in a jungle after being lazy where night is coming which is becoming dark they has not lighter but has a candle and dangerous awful soud of animals,the evil would capture their heart; in these getting rest, darkness and has not a lighter it is a problem or misfortune and awful sounds is warning of evil sprit coming it is also a problem the lighter is fortune which is hideen meaning of revolution and it can make fire to the candle after that the lightness will be come and darkness will be mitigate .

The meaning of these (a revolutionary soul does overcome lots of crises and distruct becaue of these this soul should not be stop this soul sould be keep going continuously.)
The Speed of revolution can be spread in political,social,environmental,agricultural as well as others field.

In the third line , the first sentence 'in the sky has a moon which is unobvious due to clouds this is matching with second sentence of first line 'a candle is nothing without lighter it is so sadness' ,in these moon and candle are two subject these are fortune but because of cloud the moon is unobvious so that the cloud is problem as well as 'the candle is nothing without lighter ',in there the candle is nothing because there have not any lighter this is a problem.

in these sentences two thing have in two different palaces like, moon is in the sky and the candle is in the earth to the traveller .



Others: in this poem have six line and in the first line after subject has (is verb) where in fist sentence should not be
( is) before (more) there should be (are) but to maintain frequency there is an (is)
and where has two adjective word drakness and sadness in the end so,sadness is because of darkness.

In this line have information about difficulty and problem.then in the next four line has the (have verb) after starting one or two word.

In this poem second line is a awareness like make the revolution and be overcome and first and second line are present and present cotinious.

And in the next four line are present perfect and present perfect cotinious.

In the third line , the first sentence 'in the sky has a moon which is unobvious due to clouds this is matching with second sentence of first line 'a candle is nothing without lighter it is so sadness' ,in these moon and candle are two subject these are fortune but because of cloud the moon is unobvious so that the cloud is problem as well as 'the candle is nothing without lighter ',in there the candle is nothing because there have not any lighter this is a problem.

in these sentences two thing have in two different palaces like, moon is in the sky and the candle is in the earth to the traveller .

in this poem in the second sentence of third line 'there have coming lots of dangerous animal's awful-sound' in this sentence the dangerous animal is warning of sprit coming ;about this sprit has written in the first sentence of second line ' this night is going to so deeper some evil would capture their soul in these sentences the problem is the deeper night and evil sprit these are misfortune and the solutions is the lighter or light which is fortune and revolution.

In this poem in the first sentence of fourth line' they have been ridden more mountain and river now getting rest'
This sentence is activation of traveller meaning of it revolutionar through these difficult way. This poem should be started by this sentence but to maintain sentence frequency and maining of poem it is in the fourth line.
And in the second sentence of fourth line has described before. In this poem fifth and sixth line is encouragement or inspiration of revolution.
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