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Rated: E · Fiction · Sci-fi · #2336365
He swore an Oath and it ate at him until he did something about it
The breakthrough came quietly, in a lab stained with coffee and desperation. Dr. Elara Voss, a biochemist with a swimmer’s shoulders, unveiled the HepaResp Pump—a fist-sized marvel implanted in the liver. It didn’t need air, just water. A lattice of enzymes and catalysts, it stripped oxygen from H2O molecules in the bloodstream and scrubbed CO2 into harmless bicarbonate, all powered by a chemical slurry that regenerated every 12 hours. For two glorious hours per cycle, it replaced breathing entirely. Lungs became obsolete—filled with sterile water to equalize pressure, they were mere ballast for the deep.


The first recipients were the Aquanauts, an elite cadre of swimmers who’d sworn an oath: “To honor the body’s limits, to chase the abyss without defying nature’s law.” Their creed was sacred, etched into the walls of the Oceanic Institute. But the HepaResp Pump blurred that line. Was it natural if it came from within? The debate raged, but the lure of the deep silenced it. Record depths—500 meters, 1,000—beckoned.
Kael was the best of them, a wiry figure with eyes like sea glass. His pump hummed faintly beneath his ribs, a secret rhythm synced to his pulse. Today, he’d break the 1,200-meter mark off the Mariana Shelf, a depth no human had touched. The Institute’s submersible hovered above, its lights a distant star in the black water. His lungs, filled with water, felt heavy but unyielding—no collapse, no pain. The pump churned, splitting oxygen from his blood’s water content, exhaling CO2 as a faint fizz through his skin. He was a living submarine, untethered from tanks or tubes.


The clock in his mind ticked: 1 hour, 47 minutes left. The pump’s two-hour window was a hard limit—after that, the catalysts would falter, and he’d drown in his own carbon dioxide. But 12 hours from his last regeneration, he’d be ready again. He kicked deeper, the pressure a cold fist around him. At 1,150 meters, the seafloor loomed—a jagged wasteland of volcanic rock. His handheld beacon pulsed, marking his triumph.

He’d done it.


Then he saw it: a glint in the silt. A fractured oxygen tank, rusted, stamped with the Institute’s old logo. A relic from the pre-pump era, when divers died chasing these depths. His oath echoed: “Honor the limits.” Had he? The pump was inside him, yes, but it wasn’t him. It was a machine, a cheat. His chest tightened—not from pressure, but guilt.


Back on the surface, the sub’s crew cheered as Kael emerged, water streaming from his mouth. He coughed it out, lungs raw but functional, and the pump went dormant, its slurry rebuilding for the next dive. The record was his—1,217 meters—but the vid-feed buzzed with accusations. “He’s no Aquanaut,” they said. “He’s a cyborg.” The Institute’s elders summoned him.


“You swore an oath,” Elder Marin said, her voice like breaking waves. “The pump defies nature’s law.”


“It’s in me,” Kael argued. “It uses water, not air. No tanks, no tricks—just my body, adapted.”


“Adapted by us,” she countered. “Not by nature. You’ve broken faith.”


Kael’s jaw clenched. “Faith didn’t get us to 1,200 meters. Faith killed those divers down there.”


Marin’s eyes softened, but her verdict didn’t. “You’re suspended. Return the pump, or leave the Aquanauts.”


That night, Kael stood at the cliff’s edge, the sea a dark mirror below. The pump thrummed, ready for its next two-hour dance. He could remove it—live by the oath, swim shallow like the rest. Or he could dive again, chase 1,500 meters, become a legend no oath could tether. The water called, infinite and unforgiving.


He dove.
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