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Rated: E · Novel · Romance/Love · #2339912

A man protects a girl from his abusive brother, finding love and healing together.

Neziryah sat on the edge of the couch, his head in his hands, elbows digging into his knees. The TV was on, muted, the flicker of the screen casting shadows across the room — but he wasn’t watching. He hadn’t been able to focus on anything all night. His thoughts spun in an endless loop. Renesmee. Noryah. Renesmee. Noryah. His brother. It still twisted his gut in ways he couldn’t explain. How had Noryah — his own flesh and blood — turned into that? Into someone who raised a fist at the girl Liam… well, the girl Neziryah loved. Neziryah squeezed his eyes shut, swallowing hard. He’d known for weeks, maybe months. He saw it in Renesmee’s forced smiles, the long sleeves, the flinch when Noryah moved too fast. She’d never admit it, though. Never say the words out loud. She was too proud, scared, and loyal to want anyone to see her break. A crack of thunder shook the window, and Neziryah jumped upright. His heart was already racing when — BANG BANG BANG. The front door rattled under frantic fists. “Please, please, open!” came the choked sob on the other side. Liam’s chest clenched so tightly he could barely breathe. He knew that voice. He was up instantly, fumbling with the lock, yanking the door open. And there she was. Renesmee. Drenched to the bone, hair plastered to her face, eyes wide with panic. Her cheek was red and swollen; her lip had a fresh split. She stumbled forward, nearly collapsing. Neziryah caught her just before she hit the ground, his arms wrapping tightly around her shaking form. “Renesmee,” he breathed, his heart pounding. “Jesus Christ, what happened—” But he knew what happened. Of course he did. His head whipped up just in time to see a figure appear at the end of the driveway — tall, broad-shouldered, moving through the rain with a slow, searching walk. Noryah. Liam’s stomach twisted into a hard, cold knot. His brother. His ooddamn brother. He pulled Renesmee inside, slammed the door shut, locked it, and yanked the curtains closed. She was shaking so hard he could barely hold her upright. “—he was coming after me, I—I didn’t know where else to go—” Renesmee sobbed into his chest. Neziryah clenched his jaw, his hands gently rubbing up and down her soaked arms. “You came to the right place,” he said quietly, fiercely. “You’re safe here.” Outside, a shadow passed the window. Neziryah held his breath. Renesmee whimpered softly, clutching his shirt. The figure paused. Waited. And then, slowly, Noryah walked on. When Neziryah finally exhaled, he felt the white-hot pulse of rage flare up in his chest. He pulled Renesmee tighter. “I won’t let him touch you again,” Neziryah murmured into her hair. His voice was shaking now, too, but not from fear — from fury. “He’s my brother,” he whispered bitterly, “but after what he’s done to you, I swear to God, Renesmee… he’s dead to me.” Renesmee let out a broken sob, burying her face against him. Neziryah cradled her close, rocking slightly, whispering over and over: “You’re safe. You’re safe. You’re safe now.”
Renesmee sat on the edge of Liam’s bed, her knees drawn up tightly to her chest, Liam’s oversized hoodie swallowing her small frame. She had changed out of her damp, torn clothes — the ones she’d arrived in — shivering and soaked, half from the rain outside and half from the raw panic still rattling through her bones. The sweatpants she wore dragged on the floor, the cuffs damp where they brushed against her bare feet. Her trembling hands clutched the steaming mug of chamomile tea Neziryah had made for her, fingers wrapped so tightly around the ceramic it was as if she feared it might vanish if she loosened her grip. The soft glow of the bedside lamp cast warm pools of light across her pale, tear-streaked face, highlighting the faint bruises darkening along her jaw and the shadow of a split lip. Her red-rimmed eyes, swollen from hours of crying, stared blankly into the cup, as if it held answers she couldn’t find anywhere else. Neziryah knelt quietly beside her on the carpeted floor, his expression tight with worry. In one hand, he held a fluffy towel, gently dabbing at the wet strands of her tangled hair, careful not to tug or brush too roughly over her tender scalp. His other hand hovered near her shoulder, wanting to hold her, wanting to pull her into his arms — but he didn’t. He knew Renesmee flinched at sudden touches now. His heart twisted painfully every time he remembered the way she’d recoiled when he’d first opened the door and reached for her. “We can’t let him find you here,” NNeziryah murmured under his breath, more to himself than to her, though Renesmine’s eyes flickered in his direction as if she’d caught the words. His mind raced, sifting through one frantic thought after another — Should they go to the police? Could they hide her here for the night? Would his parents understand? Would they help? But deep down, Neziryah already knew the bitter truth. Noryah always found a way to slip past the consequences. And Renesmee… Renesmine had no one. No parents who would fight for her. No family to call. No one except him. Neziryah set the towel aside and reached out slowly, tilting Renesmee’s chin with feather-light fingers so she would meet his gaze. “You can stay here tonight,” he said softly, his voice steady even though his chest ached. “We’ll figure it out tomorrow. I’ll tell my parents you needed a place to stay, or—” Renesmee’s voice broke through the silence, barely above a whisper, raw and hoarse. “I don’t want to get you in trouble.” Liam’s throat tightened painfully. God, if only she knew how much that hurt — to see her sitting there, worried more about him than about herself after everything she’d been through. He gave a shaky breath and cupped her face in both hands, gently, cradling her like she was something fragile and precious. He brushed a damp lock of hair behind her ear, his thumb barely grazing the bruise on her cheek. “You are not the one causing trouble, Renesmee,” he murmured fiercely. His voice trembled now, his eyes glistening as he leaned in just a little closer. “He is. Noryah is. And I am not—I will never—let you go back to him.” For a long moment, Renesmee just stared at him, wide-eyed and broken, as if she couldn’t quite believe what he was saying. As if she wanted to trust him, wanted to let herself believe she was finally safe — but couldn’t. Not yet. Not after everything. Neziryah had to look away for a second, swallowing hard, because the fierce, protective love he felt for her, her aching, desperate need to keep her safe, to shield her from every hurt, to fight off every nightmare-it nearly knocked the breath right out of his chest. Without thinking, he reached for the blanket at the foot of the bed and gently draped it around her shoulders. “I’ll sleep on the floor,” he whispered, trying for a small smile. “You take the bed tonight, okay? You need to rest.” Renesmee didn’t speak, but after a long, trembling pause, she gave the tiniest nod and let out a shuddering breath. Neziryah stayed by her side, not touching, just quietly there — a steady presence, a promise in the dark that no matter how messy and terrifying tomorrow might be, she wouldn’t be facing it alone.
The next afternoon, the storm clouds rolled in thick and heavy, casting a dark gray pall over the house. Rain lashed against the windows in sharp bursts, the sound a constant, uneasy drumbeat in the background. Neziryahsat was on the couch, legs bouncing anxiously, glancing every few minutes toward the hallway where Renesmine was resting. She hadn’t eaten much that day, and the worry twisted deeper and deeper into his chest. Then came the knock. No, not a knock. A pound. Sharp, angry, relentless. Liam’s heart lurched into his throat. He rose slowly, his feet heavy, his breath caught halfway between his lungs and his mouth. Each step toward the door felt like walking toward a cliff’s edge. When he cracked the door open, rain sprayed in sideways, the cold air cutting like a knife. And there, looming on the porch, stood Noryah. His dark hoodie was soaked through, rain dripping from the ends of his hair, his fists clenched tightly at his sides. But it was his eyes that froze Neziryahin, pin lace eyes blazing with rage, with possession, with the kind of cruel, feral determination that made Liam’s blood turn to ice. “Where is she?” Noryah snarled, shoving the door wide before Neziryah could stop him. He barreled into the hallway, water dripping onto the hardwood floor as his heavy boots stomped inside. Neziryah stumbled back, planting himself in front of the hallway that led to his room, where Renesmee was. His heart pounded so hard he was sure Noryah could hear it. “She’s not here.” Noryah let out a dark, humorless laugh. “Come on, little brother,” he sneered, voice curling like poison. “Don’t play stupid. She ran to you, didn’t she? Always had a soft spot for her, huh?” He took a slow, deliberate step forward. “Always wanted to play the white knight?” Liam’s fists clenched so tightly his knuckles ached. “She doesn’t belong to you, Noryah. She never did.” His voice was tight, every muscle in his body strung like a wire about to snap. Noryah’s smirk twisted into something darker. He stepped closer, towering over Liam, his breath sharp and sour in the narrow hallway. “You stealing my girl, Liam?” he hissed. “Think you can play hero? Stay out of it. She’s mine.” Neziryah could feel his pulse hammering in his throat, his vision narrowing until all he could see was Noryah’s snarling face. But somewhere inside him, beneath the panic, something fierce and unshakable rose — a fire he hadn’t known he had. “She was never yours to hurt,” Neziryah said, his voice low and trembling with fury. “Get. Out.” For a heartbeat, the air hung thick between them, neither moving, both bracing like two animals ready to strike. Then Noryah leaned in just enough for Neziryahto see the flicker of contempt in his eyes. “We’ll see how long you can keep her,” Noryah whispered, his words sharp and cold as the rain. He straightened slowly, the smirk crawling back onto his face. Without another word, he turned on his heel and stalked out the door, slamming it behind him so hard the frame rattled. Neziryah stood frozen, his fists still clenched, his chest heaving as the adrenaline roared through his veins. For a long moment, he just stared at the door, the echo of Noryah’s presence still burning in the air. Then, with shaky hands, he locked the deadbolt, drawing every chain and latch they had. He exhaled shakily, pressing his forehead to the cool wood. This wasn’t over. Not by a long shot. Behind him, down the hallway, he heard the faintest creak — Renesmee, peeking around the corner, eyes wide and terrified. Neziryah turned, his heart softening despite the storm still raging inside him. He crossed the room in three long strides, gathering her gently into his arms, pressing his forehead to hers. “It’s okay,” he whispered, though they both knew it was a lie. “I’m here. I’ve got you.” But even as he held her, Liam’s mind raced. Noryah wouldn’t stop. Not now. Not ever. And Neziryah knew, deep down, that next time—next time, he’d have to be ready to fight.
That night, the rain continued its relentless tapping against the windows, the house wrapped in a heavy, suffocating quiet. Neziryahsat hunched over at the kitchen table, his head cradled in his hands, his elbows digging into the worn wood. The soft overhead light cast a pale glow, throwing long shadows that flickered each time the wind rattled the windowpanes. His chest felt tight, his stomach churning with a hollow, nauseating ache he couldn’t shake. Across from him, Renesmee sat quietly, her damp hair falling in loose strands around her face as she gently dabbed antiseptic on the shallow cut along her forearm. The skin around it was tender, the bruise beneath spreading like a storm cloud. Her fingers trembled slightly, but she worked carefully, methodically — as if focusing on this small act of care could anchor her, could help her hold the rest of herself together. Neziryahlifted his head slightly, his eyes rimmed with exhaustion and something deeper — a raw, bitter hurt that had been festering under the surface for years, now finally cracking wide open. “We were close once,” he said quietly, his voice rough, the words tasting like ash on his tongue. “Noryah and me.” He gave a bitter, breathless laugh, shaking his head. “Before all this. Before he turned into… whatever he is now.” Renesmee paused, the bandage slipping slightly in her hand. She looked up, her eyes meeting his, shining with unshed tears. “I’m sorry, Liam,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “I never wanted to come between you two.” Neziryah let out another sharp, humorless laugh, running a hand through his disheveled hair. “You didn’t.” His jaw clenched, his gaze darkening. “He did. He made his choice the first time he laid a hand on you. He made his choice the first time he thought control and cruelty were love.” His fists tightened on the table. “And if I have to choose sides, Renesmeee… It’s not even a choice.” A heavy silence settled between them, broken only by the quiet tick of the kitchen clock and the occasional creak of the old house settling in the storm. Renesmee reached across the table slowly, hesitantly, her fingers brushing his clenched hand. NNeziryah flinched for just a second, then, with a shaky breath, turned his palm upward, threading his fingers through hers. Her hand was small and cold in his, but it grounded him, pulled him back from the edge of the storm inside his head. For a long, fragile moment, they just sat there, holding on—not speaking, not needing to. Outside, thunder rumbled low and distant, a warning in the dark. Neziryah squeezed her hand gently, feeling the faint tremble in her fingers. His voice was soft when he spoke again, but there was steel beneath it. “He’s not my brother anymore, Renesmeee.” He looked up, his eyes meeting hers, fierce and unwavering. “Not after this.” Renesmee’s lips parted as if to speak, but the words caught in her throat, her eyes filling. Instead, she tightened her grip on his hand, her silent promise. Together, they sat in the small, flickering pool of light, two battered hearts bracing for whatever came next. Neither of them said it aloud, but they both knew: the fight wasn’t over. Noryah wouldn’t walk away quietly. But neither would they.
The days stretched into weeks, each one slowly smoothing out the jagged edges of Renesmee’s shattered world. She stayed at Liam’s house, tucked away in the small, cozy spare room his parents had hastily cleared out for her. At first, she barely left it, curling up under the thick blankets like she was trying to disappear. But NNeziryah waspatient. Every night, without fail, Neziryah checked the locks three times — once before bed, once before brushing his teeth, and once more when the house had fallen silent and the only sound was the wind rustling through the trees outside. He’d walk past her door quietly, pausing just long enough to make sure he could hear her soft, steady breathing inside. Every morning, he made her tea, gently coaxing her to eat even when she shook her head and murmured that she wasn’t hungry. He never pushed, just sat across from her at the table, nibbling on toast or pouring her cereal, waiting until she took a bite or two on her own. Slowly, carefully, she began to eat again. Bit by bit, Renesmee began to come back to life. It started small: a faint smile when Neziryah made a dumb joke about the weather, or a soft laugh when his dog, Scout, tried to climb into her lap, tail wagging furiously. She started helping Liam’s mom with the dishes sometimes, or curling up on the couch beside him during old movie marathons, her head resting lightly on his shoulder. The smiles she wore now weren’t like the ones she’d faked with Noryah — stiff, nervous, edged with fear. These were shy, delicate, but real smiles. The kind that caught Neziryahoff's guard and left his heart aching with quiet, fierce gratitude. One evening, as the sun dipped low behind the hills and bathed the backyard in soft, golden light, they sat together on the back porch. Neziryah leaned back against the wooden railing, his arm draped casually across the back of the bench, while Renesmee curled up beside him, her knees drawn to her chest. She let out a long, soft sigh, her head gently settling against his shoulder. They watched in silence as the sky turned shades of pink and orange, the breeze cool against their skin, the world around them momentarily calm. “You saved me,” Renesmee whispered, her voice barely audible. Neziryah turned slightly, pressing a tender kiss to the top of her head, his arms wrapping around her carefully, protectively. “No, Renesmee,” he murmured, his breath warm against her hair. “You saved yourself. I just want to help you remember how strong you are. Renesmee closed her eyes, feeling the tight knot in her chest loosen just a little. Slowly, she shifted, turning to look up at him. Liam’s face was soft in the fading light, his eyes gentle, his mouth tugged into a small, reassuring smile. For a moment, she hesitated, fear flickering in the back of her mind like a dying ember. But then — just this once — she let herself lean in, closing the distance between them. Her lips brushed softly against his, tentative, featherlight, trembling. Neziryah froze for just a second, surprise flickering in his chest — and then he kissed her back, warm and slow, his hand rising to cup her cheek. When they finally parted, Renesmee let out a shaky breath, her forehead resting lightly against his. She felt safe. She felt loved. She felt, for the first time in what felt like forever, free. They stayed there on the porch as the last of the sun slipped below the hills, holding each other in the quiet, the world still and waiting. And though neither of them said it aloud, both knew: this was just the beginning. There was still healing ahead, still scars that would take time to fade, still nights when the past would come creeping back. But they would face it together. And for the first time, Renesmee believed — truly, deeply believed — that together, they could survive anything.


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