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Rated: E · Fiction · None · #2340036

Young prince from near by star system agrees to build time machine

e's a revised version of the passage:

As time a new man appeared with a team. This man took it upon himself traveling at an amazing speeds traveling around the galaxy, as light solidifying as weight and form.
During his time traveling he notices that as he travel time passes and the interesting thing started to happen from there observation point they see structures being built, lights, forms, colors of sorts, materials. As time goes on he the traveler begins to pick up champions people of great importance. The traveler would arrive and drop the champion n a newer future after they traded their stars for a focus machine.
Many champions came and went in the distance a lane sorrounded by twin suns became most interesting place in the universe. A dark figure appeared from the darkness swiping and reversing the planets rotation of champions planet and an hour later the black hole hit a diamond mound planet and with unseen percisio rings surrounding the planet, imprinting in space, and locking in.
A center sun, a planet not to far off, a black hole that creats havoc- though it provides cool place, yet it is surrounded in a three body problem moving strangely in orbit, the outside sun provides the warmth, the black hole rotating on the inside so fast it provide night in the quickest of fashion. The shadow of the night can be seen rotating around the planet, creating a cooling effect. And then..
The diamond planet that was stuck by black hole creates fast spinning rings cooling even more and dispersing light which can be seen in different hues.
The plants of the planet glow and don unprecedented colors. Greens, purples, reds, oranges, blues and everything there was. Growing towards the sky rotating upwards, fruiting trees so big takes months to pick by hand. They store, jell, pickled and fermented for hundreds of years.
just like that the black hole that pressed the solar system dislodges heading into the darkness leaving the great planet open for business.
People pay entire planets for the beauty of the plants and trees, fruit you taste and exhale out of your nostrils, vegetables that made unsuspecting people cry like children. Wines and fine food so delicous one could loose there mind and herbs with mind altering substances varied in form and effect some causing harbernation in humans, daze so smooth you could function in alternate states and show improvements physically and emotionally
The traveler arrived eventually. He ask for a motion with the young man. The young man by the name of Eric granted this motion and he provided a time and place. When they met the traveler talks bout, he opportunity that they would be able to the portal. Intrigued Eric accepts this preposition.
So when the machine is made it is off to the emptier part of eh planet when the now released planet goes into eclipse, the machine comes on. The burst that the black hole left sucked into space combined with the eclipse gravitational pull. The fabric of space comes open.
The traveler reveals that there is something going to happen something that they will not understand but will be seen in due time. The champion notice hunter unholster his weapon points and the champion runs in the direction of the portal:
The traveler is shot down and Eric runs into the portal. Eric having become desperate because of change, charges the portal coming out the other side. Tiny, the most finite amount consistently shrinking again and again. Now Eric exisist within the universe. He is the smallest yet one of the biggest merging metaphyscal structures in the universe flowing with the solar winds at magnificent speed being all at once and never at the same time. He is one now, able to see the smallest particle the largest and the living at once.
He begins to move at first slow and then fast. Realizing this was futile, at his tiny spec moving a nail would take millennium. Now realizing more, he all at once becomes big covering ring like massive space. Like a sight glass he moves toward the planets inhabitants of the galaxy. Systematically, selecting in moveable type time, space representation he like a lighting bolt, not shocking or killing but involving somehow. He went through a galaxy full of people selecting, funneling through them. Enticing some, others leaving resistance but both merging horrible desperate peeling death for most, instantaneous for the up lucky. Unprecedented amount of time dilation, abrupt changes, trillions of life’s spanning time at we got to live it. Reversing to appoint. Trillions of life’s lost a far of event, a calling, action from a psychotic desperate woman of eternal beauty, unseen monster, creation of heavens solar system, eventual sighting from earth, legends luck, beings, luck, evolution, wealth. A gift from the damm being? And then as he came he left. Sucking away light and matter its racing fabric indentation in space moved away and no one see it. Planet filled with life.
He after becoming indefinitely smalls Eric sees the death of the universe outward, the it compacts inward, reversing the end of time sucking in Eric. He becomes one with singularity, the gods speak. I want to tell you something. Ignore them. Eric looks angers and clashes with a god. A humongous explosion gives space, now. Expanding forever the gods gather they anger again. Eric begins to strike for the second time. Clash he gets struck. Mass, forever. Expanding in any and all direction. Eric flies out of the singularity at incredible speed.


The light go off on that side of the planet. It stays dark to Hunters surprise the light bubbles begin to fill he dark spaces. He sees the traveler body and walks past it nonchalantly. He throws a his gun through the portal but it gets sent to the other side and it hits the floor. Hunter realizing what just happened opens his eyes wide open.
Prince, my prince, can you hear us. Because if you can please help us young prince. Help.
paths that bend inward at their ends sometimes splitting two, three surfaces, see at once Eric searches. He then decides to intensify his gaze. Seeing all, yet having to focus on often running object he speaks from the galaxies depth as pointing the panning camera inward spinning and yet moving along with the turning world. He can see it all when he intensifies his gaze and from the distant future he arrives.



The lights dim in the rental and her water breaks. Alone she gets out the house scared. For the stars distance.

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