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Rated: E · Short Story · Religious · #2347380

Sincerity clung to him like a second skin.

Pastor Eli Thorn: The Local Saint

On Sundays, Eli Thorn filled the church with thunder. His voice rolled through rafters, preaching mercy, redemption, and God’s endless grace. People believed because he believed. He wasn’t a man of polish — his suit was often wrinkled, his tie crooked — but sincerity clung to him like a second skin.

Behind the church sat The Haven, a halfway house Eli had opened with donations and stubborn faith. Addicts clawing back from the edge, men just released from prison, young women running from violent homes — all found refuge there. Eli had once been one of them, fists and fury before he found faith. Redemption wasn’t theory to him; it was survival.

But mercy had limits.

One night, Tasha, barely seventeen, returned to The Haven with her face bruised, lips split. Eli asked questions. Her stepfather, she whispered. He’d beaten her again.

Eli prayed with her, but prayer burned like acid that night. He drove across town, fists clenching the steering wheel. The man answered the door drunk and sneering. Eli didn’t bring scripture. He brought his fists.

“You touch her again,” Eli growled, knuckles raw, “you won’t see morning.”

It worked — for a while. But stories kept coming. Another woman limping in. Another boy trembling from an abusive uncle. Eli felt rage rise where sermons used to be. If the courts failed them, he would not.

The escalation was slow. Warnings became bruises. Bruises became hospital visits. Each time, Eli told himself: This is God’s justice through me.

The night it went too far, Eli barely remembered the blur of fists. The man collapsed, blood pooling on the kitchen tiles. Eli’s chest heaved as he whispered, “Deliver us from evil,” his hands slick.

The body was found within hours. Whispers reached the police: Pastor Thorn had been there. His name carried both awe and suspicion.

The warrant was signed swiftly: manslaughter, assault, vigilante violence.

When the officers came on Sunday morning, Eli was halfway through a sermon. The congregation gasped as uniforms marched down the aisle. Eli raised his hands calmly, wrists ready.

“Sometimes mercy wears a different face,” he told his flock. “Pray for me.”

Gasps and sobs filled the pews as the cuffs snapped shut.

The community fractured. Some parishioners defended him fiercely: “He protected us when no one else would!” Others whispered betrayal: “What kind of pastor kills a man?”

In his cell, Eli prayed louder than ever, but the prayers felt hollow. He wondered if he had become the very violence he once condemned. The Bible on his cot lay open to Psalms, but his eyes blurred.

For the first time in decades, Eli feared he had lost his way.
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