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Rated: E · Draft · Community · #2352112

Atompunk story about life in the MCM era of America, except using 21st century technology.

In the sun-drenched suburbs of Sunnyridge, California—a planned community just east of Los Angeles where postwar optimism met the open skies of the San Fernando Valley—the homes stretched out in orderly rows of low-slung ranch houses and gleaming Eichler-inspired atriums. Butterfly roofs hovered over breeze-block walls, carports sheltered the latest in automotive design, and every backyard featured a kidney-shaped pool reflecting the endless blue above. It was July 1955, the air thick with the scent of jasmine and fresh-cut grass, and the neighborhood hummed with the quiet confidence of a nation on the cusp of everything.
Harold and Evelyn Thompson lived at 1427 Starlight Drive, a modest but proudly modern ranch with floor-to-ceiling glass sliders opening onto a central atrium filled with birds-of-paradise. Harold worked as an aeronautical engineer at Lockheed in Burbank, designing components for the jets that would soon break the sound barrier. Evelyn managed the home with the precision of a conductor, raising their two children—twelve-year-old Betty and nine-year-old Tommy—while volunteering for the PTA and hosting bridge nights.But in this Sunnyridge, the year 1955 carried conveniences that felt utterly ordinary to its residents, even if they would have seemed miraculous to anyone from just a decade earlier.Harold pulled into the carport that morning in his sleek white Tesla Model S—silent, electric, and faster than anything Detroit was churning out. The car glided to a stop under the extended butterfly roof, its falcon-wing doors lifting gracefully as he stepped out.The Tesla nestled perfectly into the mid-century carport, as if it had always belonged there.
He tapped his smartwatch—an ultra-thin Apple Watch Ultra on his wrist, its face glowing softly against the crisp white shirt and narrow tie of his era-appropriate suit. “Hey Siri,” he said quietly, “preheat the oven to 375 and start the coffee.”The watch vibrated gently in acknowledgment. Even beneath the sleeve of a 1950s tailored jacket, it looked right at home.Inside the house, the open-plan living room flowed seamlessly into the kitchen and dining area, all under exposed beam ceilings and warm walnut paneling. An Eames lounge chair sat angled toward the fireplace, its molded plywood and leather as timeless as ever. But dominating one wall was a massive 85-inch OLED flatscreen, mounted flush into a custom walnut credenza that hid all cables and components. It looked like a piece of abstract art when off—pure black glass reflecting the sputnik chandelier above.
Evelyn was already up, her full skirt swishing as she moved through the kitchen. The refrigerator—a sleek Samsung Bespoke with touchscreen door—dispensed crushed ice into her glass with a soft whir. She glanced at the built-in display showing the day’s weather (sunny, 88 degrees) and the family calendar (Tommy’s Little League practice at 4, Betty’s piano lesson at 5:30).“Morning, dear,” Harold said, kissing her cheek.“Morning. The coffee’s almost ready—your watch beat me to it again.” She smiled, tapping her own smartwatch to dim the under-cabinet lights.Tommy burst in from the hallway, baseball glove in hand. “Dad, can we take the Tesla to practice later? I want to show Coach the autopilot!”Harold chuckled. “We’ll see, sport. Remember last time when it parked itself and Coach thought it was magic?”Down at the corner of Starlight and Orbit Lane stood Norm’s Astro Diner, a classic Googie masterpiece with upswept rooflines, neon tubing, and a towering sign promising “Atomic Burgers & Martian Malts.” The Thompsons often walked there on weekends.

Evelyn was already up, her full skirt swishing as she moved through the kitchen. The refrigerator—a sleek Samsung Bespoke with touchscreen door—dispensed crushed ice into her glass with a soft whir. She glanced at the built-in display showing the day’s weather (sunny, 88 degrees) and the family calendar (Tommy’s Little League practice at 4, Betty’s piano lesson at 5:30).“Morning, dear,” Harold said, kissing her cheek.“Morning. The coffee’s almost ready—your watch beat me to it again.” She smiled, tapping her own smartwatch to dim the under-cabinet lights.Tommy burst in from the hallway, baseball glove in hand. “Dad, can we take the Tesla to practice later? I want to show Coach the autopilot!”Harold chuckled. “We’ll see, sport. Remember last time when it parked itself and Coach thought it was magic?”
Down at the corner of Starlight and Orbit Lane stood Norm’s Astro Diner, a classic Googie masterpiece with upswept rooflines, neon tubing, and a towering sign promising “Atomic Burgers & Martian Malts.” The Thompsons often walked there on weekends.

That Saturday, the family piled into the Tesla—seats folding flat for Tommy’s bike in the trunk—and drove the short distance. The car handled the turn onto the boulevard smoothly, its massive panoramic glass roof letting in the golden light.At the diner, they slid into a boomerang-patterned booth. A touchscreen tablet embedded in the tabletop let them order without waiting for a carhop: cheeseburgers, fries, and chocolate shakes. The kitchen robots—hidden behind the scenes—prepared everything perfectly.Betty scrolled through her iPad Mini, watching a cartoon streamed instantly over the diner’s Wi-Fi. “Look, they just released a new episode of Rocket Rangers!”Evelyn raised an eyebrow. “No screens at the table, young lady. We’re having family time.”Betty sighed but complied, slipping the tablet into her purse.
Back home that afternoon, Harold settled into the Eames chair with his laptop—a slim MacBook Air balanced on the ottoman—reviewing schematics for a new satellite project. The flatscreen mirrored his screen wirelessly, displaying 3D models that rotated with a gesture of his hand.Suddenly, his watch buzzed urgently. A notification from their telemedicine service: “Dr. Patel is ready for your annual checkup.”Harold had almost forgotten. He stood, walked to the dedicated “health corner” of the den—a small room with soft lighting and a high-resolution camera mounted above a comfortable chair. He sat, and the 8K camera activated automatically. On the large wall-mounted screen, Dr. Patel appeared in crystal clarity from her office in San Francisco.“Good afternoon, Harold. How are you feeling?”“Fit as ever, Doc.” He held up his wrist. The watch had already transmitted his latest vitals—heart rate, blood oxygen, sleep data from the past month.

Dr. Patel reviewed the stream on her end. “Everything looks excellent. Blood pressure steady, no arrhythmias. Keep up the walking—your step count is impressive.”A quick retinal scan via the home device, a voice analysis for early lung issues, and the visit was done in fifteen minutes. No drive downtown, no waiting room magazines from 1952.Evelyn popped her head in. “All clear?”“Clear as California sky,” Harold replied.Later that evening, as the sun dipped behind the San Gabriel Mountains, the family gathered in the living room. The sliders were open to the atrium, letting in the cooling breeze. Tommy practiced his curveball in the backyard under smart floodlights that adjusted brightness based on motion. Betty video-called her best friend on her phone, the two giggling over the latest teen fashions.The massive screen came to life with a voice command: “Play Singin’ in the Rain.” The 4K restoration filled the room with color and sound, Gene Kelly splashing in perfect high definition.Harold and Evelyn sat on the Nelson bench, his arm around her shoulders. Outside, the Tesla charged silently from the solar tiles on the roof—another quiet miracle of their everyday life.

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