I've been writing for a number of years, but have mostly done it for my own satisfaction. Recently I started writing in a number of online sites. The problem is, I get a lot of positive feedback, but not much in the way of constructive criticism from seasoned writers or articulate readers. What I'm looking for is cogent reviews from people who know the difference between "then" and "than;" "too" and "to;" and "there," "their" and "they're." I look forward to being knocked around by your honesty.